The storyline is quite engaging and to the point.Each and every character is well written and has a relevant role in the plot development. The writing has depth and intrigues you till the end with its gripping plot. Overall it's quite a gripping and engaging read considering it's the writer's debut novel.I would recommend everyone to read it atleast once. They wouldn't be disappointed.
Fun and engaging to read. Kudos to the author! Pace is steady, neither too fast nor a drag. Keep up the good work and stay consistent with the uploads..
Quality writing. The storyline is very intriguing. I am hooked on to the edge of my seat throughout. The characters are intricate and the plot is gripping.
I feel like this is a different kind of science fiction, not exactly that but also related. The current ncept of the heroine possibly being a criminal is an interesting premise. Is she an anti hero? If so this would be interesting but the emotions hopefully will be written well rather than brushing it off. Hoping for more updates!
I like this story. It has a different take on the whole multiple transmigration plot giving it a more logical bent with explanations. There is no sudden death and a sudden system that comes out of nowhere that demands the protagonist to do things. The heroine is intriguing and seems to have a dark past. I'm looking forward to more.
The premise is one of the interesting point, but same can be spoken about other this like character development etc. The fact that we will be seeing different locations is quite interesting!!!.....Truth shall be spoken......... Thee shalt readeth this causeth t is w'rth thy timeth!!!!!
Although it's a bit slow moving, the writing is coherent, and well executed. The characters are interesting and the story is different from other world hopping ones. I hope this story does not fall back on clichés. I hope to see more from this author.
Very creative and there is a novelty factor. Creates curiosity whoever reads it. There is no euphemisms and jargons and easily understood. Portrayal of the characters are too good and heroine oriented subject is what I personally love ❤a
Keep up the good work author! I'm looking forward to further developments in the story. I hope more chapters will be uploaded and you can keep up the stability of updating.
So, we really have this interesting premise going and tbh there is a coherent writing which makes it more intriguing and at the same time thrilling. As a reader, I hope that this writer would continue his/her storytelling with outmost interest. Will rate this as A-.
NMarianna