Reviews of The Lust System by Elfriedenn - Webnovel

Hello Again! I read my last review, and it was too long so I've decided to change it. This is the first novel that I've written, and you will see a lot of things that you might not like. I will just say that I will try to write better every day. Next would be, if you are reading this, just enjoy the novel. If you're fine with it, continue reading and vote for the novel with Power Stones! If you don't like it, find other novels that you like or maybe DM me on discord for your suggestions/corrections. ==================== My website where you can read my latest chapters: Elfriedenn.home.blog There are around five free chapters available in there! If you want to read more than 15 Locked Advance Chapters in my website, you can find the Password on my Patreón: Patreón.com/Elfriedenn Note: Please read the tags in the description before reading. There are incest, rape, and many more tags in there. In case you get magically surprised, not expecting it. Discord: http://discord.gg/PdgErwK (If you have good suggestions and stuff, join here! Talking about how they hate the incest in my novel and useless things like that will be kicked from the group)

It was a very good story. Not something I would normally read, but excellent in all. I don't actually care for the ending? Beginning? But that is just my preference.

Hey author, what's up with your rewrite of the novel? Was it taken down? I can't access the book info or unlock chapters.

it started out really good than took a left turn, off a cliff, blew up, then burned... so to sum it up, the story and mc just keep getting dumber

interesting story with a mc who change during the story and did not stay the same from the start to where i am 170 more chapter keep going and ty

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bien, claro y sofisticado si no fuera por mi compañero tal vez no haya leido esta obra

I love this book, and hope the author continues!

The best. . . .

Overall like this book back in the day but then one day author just ups and dissapears. All the old links are gone with no way to contact. Not even on the personal blog that is still up. Wish we knew if the author was ok at least.

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llove his novel its very detailed and good and the fact that u dont need fast passes to read the whole bbook akes me sooo happy keep upp the great work

there is nothing to add, since the author does not post it here anymore. This is my grade for all 180 chapters...............................

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it started great with the system and the harem but after chapter 130 the story went downhill. what a letdown. it started great with the system and the harem but after chapter 130 the story went downhill. what a letdown.

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It was fine at start but author totally destroyed everything. At the starting MC was kinda smart and quick-witted but then he turns dumb, slow and annoying. Its like MC is a kid whose being played around by adults. lots of unwanted or not compulsory info are being dumped but compulsory info are not given. everything is just random. s*x scenes are also getting boring. hah, so frustrating.

YUCKKKKK!!!!!!!!!! WAT THE FAK !!! THERE SO MANY GIRLS OUT THERE BUT RAPING HIS OWN BLOOD BILOGICAL SISTER ?????? THIS NOVEL IS FOR MENTAL ILL PEOPLE. 😠 THIS WORSE THAN ANIMALS. you a devil. Rapist

All I got say is this novel is amazing and I enjoyed reading it and hope you continue it. I love the characters and the different abilities they have and hope the main character gets some sort upgrade to his powers soon.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Such a great novel but huge question. Is this still being updated? Cause my gosh its been like 6-10 Months and nothing... I mean, i really enjoy this nove but theres no explanation for the stop in releases

so fare I have realy liked it I have not read all of it as I am hoping for more. so I would love for more chapters if possible and when ever I can I will vote 👌 💘 😎

Eu realmente quero adicionar este Original à minha biblioteca para ler mais tarde quando houver um monte de capítulos compilados, mas estou com tanto medo que alguém veja meu telefone e pegue um site da capa = '(lol. Eu não tenho temos coragem para isso, então vamos esperar que eu possa encontrar este romance novamente em algum momento, quando houver mais capítulos.

why did this novel stop last year? it's a good novel I am at the first dream world chapter and I think it's good. filler words for the minimum

1. Lust system is forgotten after 100chaps and MC doesnt bother doing missions anymore 2. MC is supposedly possessive but forgets about few he raped bcz he cant be bothered 3. MC is a total asshole who rapes women with his skills 4. 80% of the novel is filler and about random thoughts that are explanations of explanations 5. MC’s initial goals to create a harem forgotten and tries to become strong

This novel is well set, its MC system is interesting, the characters are not so boring, at first in my opinion it is a bit confusing but while you are reading you are liking the story, in general a pleasant reading

It's kinda cringe TBH, characters are 2D, bad development, the MC is a hypocrite and a fucking idiot, thing just happen to move the plot ( Not like there's much to move), the characters are not funny and there a whole lot of other problems . In conclusion, it's trash, but not good trash, just trash.

you have to go to his website and pay to read past chapters 182 so it will not be updated. That would be fine if he would release a chapter once in a while but no you have to pay.

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