I have been thoroughly enjoying this! I think the character development is amazing, and the way that the author slowly introduces the world is really skilled.
Great novel really starting to like it. Think it's gonna be great. Good, because that means you’re the right person to help us find the best holiday movie of all time.
Very interested and don't lock chapters because it is stupid let them all you just kep saying new chapter coming soon. Galway'skkdjoghkhfjfjjurdsxhjju jhfxgoppoigfioooohrwyjm zfyokf. Boitfcv bkoefgiooiuhvmooorssdvkooijhbsaqeuocxAwyookgsruokzaaweyj h fix it
I'm going to be straight with you guys, i didn't read the novel yet, just before i wrote this review i have read the description and i can't seem to trust this, are we really going to believe that he is the first person to watch **** 10000 times, i can guarantee that there are countless people who did this, the requirement sould be atleast 100000 or 1000000, but I think 100000 is more manageable. Let's be real with ourselves we all know 10000 is not a lot.
i love this book i never stopped reading it but i think we could improve a bit well not that my opinion counts other than that its amazing keep up the great work
Great story, please update.
Also fun fact, did you know that a persons ass can stretch up to 20 cm, that a racoon can fit in it? Well its not true, I think. Don't try this.
You know, Its kinda annoying when you meet 10 yr old fucking idiots that complain about not knowing how to read properly, and then complain because they cant read the tags, complaining that 'The story isn't progressing its just focused around ***' IT IS A FUCKING HENTAI NOVEL YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE TO READ THE TAGS JUST READ THE FUCKING TITLE Holy shit man
Love the novel very much❤. Don't know why you didn't continue writing it. Don't have much to say about the novel, (but loved it though). Hope you continue writing it
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very sexual and seems to be something to read, seems like a normal get a app that gives you powers but it's just all sexual arousal and how to pleasure women without them knowing, not bad just not good to do if it happened in real life....
really good story so far, wish you kept going. and writing more chapters
I got way too attached too fast.
stayed up the ENITYER night to keep reading it.
Some of the women who mc ***** are not appearing in the story again for quite some time. He only spends time with his sister and most of the women don't have any time with him. They only appear for 2.3 chapters and disappear again for quite a while.
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I just started but I think it looks great, the story is good enough.
I like Dual Cultivation, The Sinful Life Of An Emperor, Profane Prince Of Domination, the story is also quite good there
The first 120 chapters were good enough. There is some interesting plot and some good smut. Worlr building was very badly done, we don't even know if the location is on Planet Earth. There are no information about other countries too so I really don't know if it is Earth.
The parents are not present even after 170 chapters, and they are not dead but gone on a vacation or something, but they never phone or text for the entire story. The main character has a lower than normal iq with no common sense and street smarts. He doesn't have a long term plan for the whole story.
Any reader should stop reading when they see the chapter with Evil Ghost Luo. 120th chapter or further. After that chapter nothing happens, writing quality drops somewhat and plot dies prematurely.
The story started well, it was attention - grabbing and lost plot. I was fascinated, enthralled and glued until chapter 130.
The author can do well again. We are breathless in our expectations of the progression of the plot.
This is a very dumb story. The world, the actions of the heroes, the logic of their actions and reactions to what is happening are so unrealistic that you cannot imagine.
The system is so imbalanced that you would quit this game in five minutes. It gives mega cool skills at the very beginning and mediocre then, destroying the idea of development. There is no cultivation, only the will of the author and an endless combination of circumstances.
Erotic scenes are so unrealistic. Poor girls have only three (one double) buttons and always maximum excitement (really, always 100%), while the partner acts only with an aura. And the main character is always ready to fight. (Yes, that's right, you already know who (or what) is the main character here)
Summary. Read it as a farce, a comedy, a common sense tragedy. Prepare facepalms. You have been warned.
Not really the best story so far but it's not bad either I haven't reached the end but the story hasn't been updated anymore so I hope it's done and not dead
Thank you for the Novel, it’s super really good the MC is in the middle of his character development and has some super fun system. I hope you continue this novel for long. Seriously I’m so grateful having reading you work it’s so different from every novel I’ve ever read it has a lot of potential and many possible routes to go choose from. We know it's your first novel but continue improving since there'a so many loopholes on the story that could be filled with many possibilities and things to develop.
Stability of Updates : No updates
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
It started off as something casual and fun to read until things slowly became serious and they started to just talk about how they should plan for their future and do this then that to show how smart they are.
I'm disappointed.
This book started out really well, loved the exotic writing. Now it is just dragging along. The MC keeps putting off becoming strong by getting more women. Now it not even lust just writing for filler.
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