Chapter comments on the chapter Breaking Point of the book Archangel

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FilthiestCReader
The only way to express what I feel for this Chapter and Book is: HUH There was no Build up to Josh and Krystals Lying/Framing him to the Vice Principle and earning him a ISD. No explanation of How he felt when he lost control. (The Scene in the Vice Principles office: how did he feel when his rage overcame him, the mental battle he went through to stay calm he just let himself lose control.) No explanation of the world they live in, and for why Josh and Krystal Don't feel bothered by his Drastic Physical change and glowing eye. No explanation of how he got over gaining his powers The whole story feels rushed as if to get the MC to a certain point in the story, if that was your goal you should have started from there with flash backs to explain why he is like what he is, Instead of an unfinished back story. The story has potential but there are too many plot holes.
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