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Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel. Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel. Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel. Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel. Obligatory 1 star review for dropped novel.

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Hi everyone! I know that there maybe lots of people who are waiting for this book to update another chapter but, unfortunately, after geting out of the hospital, I was stacked with loads of tasks to do. However, I will continue to write and persevere to write this book to completion even if it means writing for a year or so. It is possible that you will notice a change with the style of writing in the long run but I am very grateful for all those who have continued to support this book despite the lack of updates and I promise, I am doing my best. You guys are awesome!

This story is just starting out so I have a wait and see attitude but so far I like the direction it is going ...................................

The first chapter was great, very descriptive if it's scene. It allows the readers to familiarise with the characters, very relatable. Nice work, love the cover and writing style.

Great understandable writing style. Story is great and characters have distinct personalities. I can't wait to read what will become of the world and the characters that the author has made. I don't usually write reviews but I seriously felt the urge to write one in this. Hope the best of luck for the author. Peace out! (JOSEPH MY FAV CHARACTER)

Go ahead and just check it out, it won't disappoint. The intro alone hooks you in with amazingly realistic descriptions. The author has the ability to paint a fantastical picture of the scenery hat draws you into the moment. Don't be disappointed for too long when the scene changes, it will pick up over the chapters as the mystery and action does. The author has obviously thought out a lot for the long term. It's like watching a unfolding game of chess. I'm not fond of the characters though, not a single one. At most I'm interested in what the mysterious 'antagonists' are planning. Our MC Tovio doesn't hold my interest and is actually a bit stuck up and annoying in my opinion. The sides are much more interesting than he is though the author does seem to do this on purpose. Lead up perhaps? There is a mysterious past and I do look forward in seeing how he'll grow weak to strong. But it's the gaming system and military tactics that's keeping me here, not the characters. The action sequences, planning and each scene to transition and onward are again amazingly detailed. Beyond excellent writing style and grammar for a WN novel.

Nice, I already put It in my library This First chapter was Crazy and caught me in. The only problems are the fact that the chapters are short.

This is amazing... I could clearly depict the picture of the battlefield. The male lead is awesome and I'm definetly keeping this in my library. Writing quality is great, the way you describe each scene is great( something which I'm having difficulty with) but the story is simply amazing. I'm hoping for more chapters...

first of all, I was surprised by how deep the author's vocabulary was... Well, the story is pretty exciting and you will get curious as what would happen next every next chapters. There's also this sense of thrill because of how deep the words used is. Also nice MC btw, and awesome plot, but the atmosphere somehow feels dark to me, not like it is. My only problem is, only... some chapters were short and unsatisfying. Well, It didn't reach me an hour finishing reading it... well, I guess that's because the chapters released are still few. Yea, I guess I will stick around for the upcoming more chapters. Good Work author.

I am giving the story a perfect five because I liked it. As far as I have read, character interaction looks ok. The description is very vivid and clear that I can clearly picture the scene of the story. About the writing quality I could not find any mistakes in grammar. Vocabulary too is impressive, I could see a lot of going on with the story through the way you write. Next is how you devise your strategies in your battle. While writing this review I took a peek in the next chapter. I read about how you lay-out your plans in strategy making. Especially in how they work using the wedge formation against etc. It really shows you did your homework. Your story gives me an inspiration in how I will write my future works. Although the story is written in a generic classroom setting. It is unique and can be related to Valkyria chronicles. Yes, that is the story that I can relate to your story. Once again, thank you for reading my review!

So far, I find the book interesting. The book is descriptive, and the grammar is really good. Keep up with the good work, and I'm looking forward to it!

Writing quality is great. Feels like you are a lot knowledgeable about the language. A little mistakes here and there. But overall its nice. Updating quality is what I would not like to comment. I can tell you are giving a lot of thoughts to your story before writing. So the late updates. Plot is a nice one. And scenes portrayal is what you are the best at. World design I can feel it can go better. But this is just the starting. Overall its a pretty good read and enjoyable. So keep up the good work. Now I would like for your help too. So don't hold back.

Yeah, I’m pretty much amazed. The vocabulary is amazing the world building is amazing everything is simply superb. This here is high quality writing with a lot of potential. I suggest every reader out there to give this a try! I’ll be waiting for further chapters! Your Friendly Neighbourhood 👑

Writing quality is great, even though there is many mistakes but its small. 4 star for this. Stability of updates is very unstable. You can't just updated it like once every 3 day or leave it for like 20 day without mentioning anything. 2 star for this. Story development is quite good, i can comment a lot about this so 4 star. Character design a little misplaced, but its nothing great so 4 star. World Background is great, 5 star for this. Overall a pretty good novel.

The author has a way with words which makes it seem as the scenes are unravelling right in front of the reader's eyes. Very few authors are able to do that and you are one of the few ones. There are a few grammatical errors but that certainly doesn't take away from enjoying such a good read. Keep up the good work, author. Hope to read more wonderful words that you put on paper.

What can I say, you've got a really vast collection of vocabulary on your beck n' call. Sadly, even if that's the case, some of your sentences was not constructed properly, which made your reader to think for quite some time in order to understand what you were trying to portray. It's too earky to tell that a story is good with just a few chapters presented. But so far, the development is good and the premise is interesting. Keep up the good work author! Godbless.

I must say that the description of the scene is wonder, I felt to be there and witness with my own eyes, the bloodshed_😱 Small errors are negligible too from the reader perspective but make sure to correct in revision, world background and character design is great and yes...man its too hard to write a review... I just write what I felt to be mentioned. Good luck for the story, continue updating.

Hi guys! Author here. I hope that you are enjoying my very first written novel! I appreciate very much your support for this novel as it is very humble. If you are enjoying it, please do help me by rating the story! Thank you and please continue to read the novel!

Great novel and amazing the plot. But The chapters are too short. Make the chapters at least about 1000-1200words it will be great if you did it. The language is good and easy to understand. That's all for now, I don't know how will be the novel in future but I bookmarked it

Vocabulary skills. Above of what I cannnnn like awesome story. It's like a challenge tho. The story itself is making me curious and exciting 😂 like. Especially when... Joke spoiler alert. Anyways this story is great 👌 can't wait for next chapters tho. Maybe I read to fast.