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xWangan
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xWangan

Hello readers. I’m the author of ‘The Zombie Queen’s Second Chance’. I’m going to use the review panel to write about a few things I wasn’t certain where to put before. Also, please ignore my rating. I just shamelessly put it at 5 stars, because why not, right? As of now I’ve got honestly no idea how long the novel will be. I’ve got most of the plot figured out, but as of right now I’m still not sure if everything of it will be used unchanged. I’ve been writing now for quite some time, but it’s my first time trying to put my writing out there, and in a foreign language to that. Because of that, while I am trying to check grammar, I may make some mistakes. In case anybody sees some, feel free to point it out to me. I will gladly fix it. About the story itself, since I know that’s probably what is the most interesting for a lot of people, here’s some information's. Even though it’s a novel with an Apocalypse oriented world, I’m not really a fan of fighting, or rather my abilities to write fights aren’t good enough. Because of that I will be trying to take the novel in a slightly different direction, in which my female lead will be more focused on her daily life, and perhaps what she knows best – business. That’s why her abilities won’t really be supper offensive, and she herself, even though she is called the Zombie Queen, won’t be super overpowered. About romance. There will be some, and the main couple won’t take long to get together after meeting each other. But the thing is, our ML is going to need some time to come out. So, don’t expect him to be running around FL too soon. I think that’s all for now. xWangan
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wikstar
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wikstar

I'm enjoying the story, I hope u can update soon, noticing it's been a year since the last. Looking forward to the next chapter😊😊👍👍😊😊👍
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aaelite1
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carry
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carry

Why the story is not updating. It's been so long please hurry and update. I am waiting for long enough. I like the story very much. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😭😭😭😭
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Mercyllenda
This story is quite interesting... Simply catch my attention just look at the synopsis 😍😍😍😍 but here i want to ask, when will you update the story.. I miss the mc and male lead😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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SidheFire
The story was great. It moved at a steady pace and the characters were cool. Unfortunately the author has stopped updating, so no matter how good it is, it's rather useless if the story isn't being updated.
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gusdefrog
It's interesting. Zombie did not turn out to mean quite what I thought it meant. It checks boxes on many genres, including apocalyptic, reincarnation, and cultivation. Apart from the occasional small grammatical error, the writing is easy to follow, although the style is a bit narrative for me. The writer is very consistent so far!
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clandestine13
Story is not bad. It has good grammar and a decent plot. If you are looking for romance, so far there is none at all and I think ML will show himself on the mid or latter part since story is more on personal growth of FL as zombie/pretend human.
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InnerVoice
Questions I need answers to or I won’t change my ratings. 1. Why would a zombie need money when even the living don’t use it? 2. Delicacies? What delicacies can a zombie even eat eh? Brains and flesh or some gel or stone inside other zombies head if the story is cliche enough, but other than that I can’t think of a single thing. 3. How can someone so lazy be powerful enough to become queen of the zombies? 4. If she is so lazy, how is it that she have enough energy to even get revenge? Can’t she just avoid them and live peacefully since she is soo lazy?
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mhiz_spicy
😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚☺️☺️☺️😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😊😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚☺️☺️😚😚☺️☺️
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Scarlettbunny
It's different, you learn right away about the FL's past and feel for her sad destructive path. Post apocalyptic, zombie, cultivation user which transmigrated from another life. It is definitely unique but the story is rather slow but once you get past the necessary information it turns and you start cheering for FL, her wonderful dog luck (soft spot for German Shepherds) and her newly adopted daughter Lili. Keep up the good work, especially the fighting, struggles and relationship between mother and daughter. Nothing can make the heart strings tighten more then someone's self sacrifice for the people they love.
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TrinityShock
Loved your style of writing.. it feels like i was reading a translation novel XD (Unlike mine.. that feels like a fan-fic XD) I always adored zombie apocalypse type of stories, like zombie sister strategy. So i'd probably read it more.
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dillydally_girl
The first chapter of the story got me hypnotized. Maybe because there's a lot of Chu name and I honestly not use to reading a name like your characters. But anyways, the story is great.
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NIUr
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NIUr

:ok_hand: original :clap: idea :clap: Pretty unique twist on the cultivation-op-plis-nerf-hax genre-thingo. Enjoyable, good world building, er Dunno, perhaps one of the edgier cultivation ones out there? Pretty good. Can't really ****post this. *tips fedora*
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ThatAmazingGirl
I was able to read it to a point. Although I'm not a fan of transmigration stories and all. I mist say it is well written. And organised. To those fan of such stories, you could give it a try.
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Daoist_Food
Although I'm only reviewing this at eight chapters, I have to say that your novel is great. The writing quality is a full on five as is the stability of updates. I love the plot and especially that even when your novel is about zombies, the people around the female lead are pretty realistic in their reactions.
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CrescentWolf
This is a solid 5 out of 5 in every aspect. The writing quality is spotless and the stability of updates is perfect with 2 chapters a day. Also the story development is very smooth and enjoyable - I did not see the zombie coming (though its in the title.)
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stella2138
The story is pretty good.However,i'd advise you to change the cover. The story's aura doesn't match too well with the cover.Yes the cover's nice but i'm looking at the aura it exibits. find something much more suitable for your story . What i've experienced is that the title and cover of a book attract more or less traffic of readers.Your title is really good. So just change the cover.I assure you,when you see the cover,you'll feel connected to it and you will find the one that exibits the same aura as your story. Apart from this your story is very nice.
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FallenBlue
I enjoyed reading it, author. Hope you won't drop this story. It's well-written and engaging, so just wait for some time and I'm sure people will discover this gem. :-) Keep the good work btw!
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