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cLancelot
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Creative_Geek
It took time to read it,but it was worth it! Well written and interesting plot,it is one of the major factors I read it! I daresay,you should read this book in your free time,and that free time will go on and on
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THE_WORDSMITH
So it was really a good read and I am looking forward to reading more in future. the characters are designed very nicely, I also liked how the image link was shared for the beats or demons.
The only regret is that the first volume came to an end a bit too soon. Please make the future volumes a bit longer. A very good job author.
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MyCatPaws
From the synopsis, it's a time-travel novel but not like the cliche type where the ML remembers his past but this one always forgot his memories.
You'll be curious about what happens in his past and why does the demon constantly make a contract out of him.
The description and storytelling were easy to read and u can visualize right away the scenes that the writer wants to portray. It's a good work author. keep up šāāļø
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nixrsr
seriously, this book is so good! it always leave me hanging after reaching the end of the chapter. hope to read more chapter coz this is a very good novel! keep writing
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mary_olajire
The prologue is really interesting. I like the portrayal of the main character and the author knows how to make you want to read the next chapter. Good job, author.
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Nicole_99
A superb way of storytelling. I found the prologue to be really interesting. It's a little sad for the friend to sacrifice themselves though.
I love the idea of travelling back in time over and over fascinating as the person tries to change their fate and can't. It is a miserable situation but surely there is a chance in taking action.
A good job and interesting story. The author even gives us links to help us imagine the demons.š
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TheSuccessor
I really like the story, made me interested as if I was reading my own story. When I say that, I mean your writing is like mine so I can see what your saying. Also, I reviewed your so will you please review mine
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ArkAnghel
Expectacular! amazing fine work the background the character portrayal best I was intrigue maybe Ill go write fantasy next because of this XD well I really want to go brief with the characters and the settings improvement :D
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Ferrenom
This is actually good I enjoyed it! Just gotta let you know. I hope he continues this series as I am enjoying it so far, keep up the good work.
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Lamarti
I hope the author writes more about this novel. This is seriously good, the author knows how to leave the audience hanging and wanting more and I'm one of them. Please author-nim keep writing satisfy my cravings.
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Kleptomaniak
-The writing quality is better than most of the novels I've read. This one has great potential in reaching the high ranks in webnovel.
-Stability of updates is unsure as it is a new novel. I gave it a 4/5 either way because the author is currently dropping a chapter everyday with only one day missed.
-Story Development this is where the potential lies in. The prologue really captured me, at the end of it I was thinking how could Rey change the future? The questions I have makes me want to keep reading, the author intended for the readers to think of questions so that they could all make sense somewhere in the story.
-Character Design, Im loving it. The group's design is compatible. Rey is sometimes an Air head who thinks about the wrong things, Zen is knowledgeable but is a bit childish, Maki is always calm and collected, Than sounds like a serious person.
-World Background, You can clearly imagine the world the author describes. The proses are on point and it creates a surreal mix of reality and high fantasy.
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mssuigeneris
Excellent prose with little to no grammatical errors. I like how the author builds up the ******* as each chapter progresses.
Re: opening chapter, I suggest you don't include image links since webnovel does not support that format sadly and we can't view the linked images in the chapter. I think the only visual we can post here are our covers. Which should be original, otherwise, there might be copyright issues. Its better if you just describe the characters designs more vividly.
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