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This is like dungeons and dragons mixed with transmigration. Anyone looking for a little adventure and are tired of romance novels on the site, they should check this out. It's descriptive and not like the other transmigration novels. The FL is quite a badass, hunting down dragons and monsters. Keep up the good work author!
Reader, you have a very good way of immersing your audience into your story. The relationship between it would feel like as a **** and the 4th wall breaking, all are laid down nicely. Keep it up, sorry for the long wait.
It most definitely reads like a manga!
Another victim of Truck-san has fallen pray to a reincarnation story except both reader and MC have no idea what's going on! You're in for a wild adventure because not only is she thrown into a random dungeon system wild setting....this system is nuts.
I mean sure there are abusive systems, mean systems and such but this one is a BABY MAKING system?! And it's such an unreliable system too, she's left stuggling to figure thing out chapter. It should be fine, the MC is a little crazy herself and reads like a silly anime character, complete with emoticons.
The writing has a lot of room to improve but is clear and appropriately structured.
You'll be left confused but you won't be bored!
Yui leads us in a heart pumping adrenaline action with this system reincarnation twist. A magnet bar XD attracting pests and showing wacky attitude to brave her adversaries. This is a cool story that make hearts beats for more.
Good luck with the competition!
Also not sure where everything will incline towards but--
Truck-kun!!! How much do you hate us humans? We created you and this is what you are gonna pay us!?!?! What a mean inanimate but seemingly sentient killer. Hmph!
I am the first one here...
So let's start.
As the chapters are few, it's hard to say where the story will go and to review it. But let's start with the chapter 1.
Well when I started with the first chapter, I was like really??? Cherry Blossoms ??? Looks like we both have a strong inclination towards it. Anyways it's a nice write up and keep writing !!!
Hope to see new chapters soon.