id like to give you 5 stars but since their are no chapters to read and consider this click-bait you get 0 stars from me,( screw this website for not allowing that)
So this review is supposed to be 140 letters long but I just want to say that this story is really interesting and the way the main character is determined to be at the top makes his way up by using others for his own goal is quiet unique plot
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Romantic love story with gud story lineβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊ simply I like itππππππππππππππππππππππππππmainly the emperor luc..he is like a prince from fairy tale..
please write more I like evil MC. Finaly a OP evil MC I can dig. Sadly Immortaly is overated but evil empire Palpy ways sound more fun to write about. so more world building please.
I loved it if only there were more chapters cause I am literally in love with this fanfic πππ€.plz do what you doπππ. like seriously this is a amazing fanfic. This is the kind of fanfic I have been looking for for a long time
This is a really good story with nice plot coming along pls keep up the good workπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
It's still too early for me to decide and give star, but I'll give 5 stars for now, because I like the title and concept of it
The tag for this story :
- Male Protagonist
- Manipulative Protagonist
- Transmigration into a book
- Time skip
- Sarcastic protagonist
- Calm and smart protagonist
- Schemes and conspiracies (I guess? too early for that. But it's probably gonna have it)
If you're harry potter fans, and you like this kind of tags, than maybe you'll like this
As a fellow reader and fellow harry potter fans, I am quite satisfied with the current chapters
I hope author won't drop it π» ^_^
I do love the story in general and it builds up quite well. As someone who enjoys observing human minds from a far, i do appreciate this story.
But i did find it bothering how the new sentences weren't seperated from each other.
For example.like this.do you see how the sentences.arent seperated from the.dots.?
Maybe its a hogwarts thing, i'm not to aware of the series but that was the only problem on the story i saw so far.
Also, the stories are a bit to long.
Maybe aim 1.5k a chapter. A lot of popular novels seem to be doing it.
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Hello my readers!Author here.I shamelessly give myself five stars.
I give my heartfelt gratitude for all those who read this and support me.
Give your opinion in the comments section and vote if you like the story.
Thanks for reading.
grimmhorizon