Reviews of New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic by Fortunate_Soul - Webnovel

YOU LIED TO ME, YOU SAID YOU'D COME BACK!!

Just awful. Boring and not written well. Author forgets really important stuff like a character who he considers a sibling but is forgotten for like ever until people kept commenting on where the character was. Also the Mc is not written well like decide if he is smart cold and calculating or if he is insane and delusional. Also Mc is a major hypocrite and it’s frustrating and boring.

mc is a villain wannabe who changes 180 degrees for hermione. just another sissy and shtstorm. a sorry excuse of a fiction.

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Forced harem where MC who is usually cold and ruthless turned balless beta when he is around his women who make him do things he's uncomfortable with. Start out with loner cold mc but slowly forced to be kind, socialize, make new friends etc.. by his side women. The whole romance things just spoiled the book for me. Dropped after painful 100 chs

This is a really good fanfic the interpretations of the characters was really interesting and although the protagonist is more in the Anti-Hero section his actions are still showed to be reasonable, it’s a shame that it has been dropped dispite the author claiming it’s just on hold.

mediocre hp fanfic. HP is darker than normal and has memories of past life. At the time of me originally reading this, I did like darker stories, but this has since changed. I am rating the story on my current tastes. Anyways, he is a genius and is fairly op. He though gets too focused on making money and making weapons (like guns). Most of his research into magic is done in ways that are unnecessarily dark. Honestly, forgot many details (since it has been 2 years since any update), but not worth re-reading. I rate it a 2.5. Note this is based on a custom rating system I use which makes 2.5 as an average story. This does not mean it is bad, just nothing really special or horrible about it.

First of all it's not to bad. I like the idea of a Harry that doesn't care. But in my opinion the character is too much of a genius. When he's going to school he already progressed in magic that there isn't really much in the future to grow as a character.

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This was a pretty entertaining novel. I'll be honest, it wasn't best seller material, but it did it's job as a fun time-waster with some interesting ideas. Transmigrated unhinged and emotionally unstable Harry was definetly a fun concept to play around, and many character interactions were quite cute and funny. I liked the way they were setting up Luna Lovegood's introduction at the end too, even if it got cut short by the "week" long hiatus. One big downside of this novel however was the writing quality. It's not terrible, but it's very limited, and the author seems to have particularly struggled with proper punctuation use, and an aversion to proof reading, if the numerous typos littered about are any indication. There's a lot of verb and noun repetition, and especially the infamous "and and and and and" chains in his semi stream of thought paragraphs. Otherwise, I did indeed enjoy it, and hope to see it return sometime soon. Meanwhile, I will mark this novel in my library and await new chapters, if that day ever comes.

A pretty good story not perfect by any means but still a very fun story to read Harry at times comes across as unlikeable but does seem to not be overly terribly written 8/10 would read again

Hi to everyone seeing this. This is not a complete criticism on my part and more of a throwing ideas for the author or anyone who wants to write a HP fanfiction it'll probably touch some criticism since I'm commenting on a story I didn't read till the end and the reason I gave 5 stars? Because the start was actually nice to read. [Related to this story] 1-Year One is so d**n long😂. That's not something bad, at least if you make it more entertaining. Even on the movie(book had more details so I'm mentioning the movie) there where parts that didn't get mentioned or timeskips during each semester. It would be nice to get more fillers with other people and not the "sheep", as in making friends, mischief and all that but with a certain engagement (Not saying it didn't have it, I just didn't like how it was displayed). 2-Hermione Granger I love Hermione she's my favorite female character followed by Luna, She's the girl who didn't know about the occult world but while still being a kid prepared herself because she was fascinated with it. Yes she's a pain and a know-it-all BUT Emma Watson was cute and Hermione because one of the most well versed Witch of her generation ending up working in the ministry while being "mudblood" a muggle born. Okay enough waifu gushing, the point is I like Hermione but even I ended up not liking the drama around her and Re-Harry. 3-Harry Potter and the audacity of this Bit**... I mean, Harry Potter and the making of Money So I'm reborn in Harry Potter as the Boy who lived himself? Cool, I live with people who treat me wrong and I don't even get presents. I'll make my own money and get stuff. That's also okay and a nice mindset to have. "You're a wizard Harry." "No Hagrid, I'm a CEO." Galions can be converted to pounds he could make wizard money and convert and invest. That's okay. Why not import technology and make it "Wizard Based"? Owls take time, deliveries with flu powder or aparation could be a thing. Making a company to make communication easier is also a thing. Or anything wizard related as a matter of fact, just maybe wait till 3rd or 4th year so we can get used to new Harry, and have at least an adventure. 4-Why does he need money? The Potters are loaded and I mean freaking loaded, they have houses, Mansions, Islands, Artifacts, The are the Noble and whatnot house of Potter it's as old as the Blacks and Harry is Heir to both houses so loaded 2X. Now for my messed up thinking and ideas... When researching HP material first you need to know what you want to do obviously (One of the reasons I didn't try to write a HP fic), Why do i say this? Because there's Lord of the House Magic or whatever it's called. There's also inheritance, Artifacts,Lands, Debts and whatnot. There's also libraries with research datas from each house seeing as some have an area of specialization. If the person focuses on original plot there's the knowing when what happened and putting your own version(this seems easier than the whole houses dilemma), characters personalities, describing moments, the logic for challenges (Philosopher Stone for example) and all that rubbish. There's also consistency, this doesn't mean being repetitive or something like that. What I mean is if the guy's a d**k then either maintain or slowly change his personality but with a reason and not just "I want attention on me" without a reason leave the Petty attention seeking to Malfoy and Ron😂. Anyway I'm tired of typing, I could say more but this feels like a lot.

At the begging it wasn't bad but it's turned into a story where the MC is obsessed with hermione she 'betrays' him and he ignores her for a week and then its all back to 'normal' it's not a horrible story but not for hermione haters

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Well it was fun reading this. ---------------------------------------- Well I'm just fulling some more lines to complete the review so yeah. A typical fanfic .. of an adventure of an easily offended & moody MC having a feverish passion for Magic with a good amount of mushy-gushy feelings.

I really like this fanfic, I am waiting for your updates. And please do more fanfics from GOT, HP, OP etc. by bringing elements from another like you are doing. Magic to GOT, mundane or secular elements to magical world.

i like it, until the end of chap 37 . . .

I personally like the novel it interesting and it kept my interest bu t near the end of the chapter that where last released its main topic was more of romance. P. S author I think u need to update more

la historia es buena, tiene un enfoque interesante en las acciones del MC que no había visto en otros fanfic de HP, aunque si tuviera que decir algo molesto seria el hecho de que como MC no tiene recuerdos se convierte en Harry quiera o no, por ende en la novela tiene arrebatos emocionales no acordes con su madurez y estúpidos desde cierto punto de vista, aunque lógico si realmente tuviera la inteligencia y la edad que tiene en ese cuerpo; a pesar de eso el desarrollo fue bueno aunque quizás toma muchos capítulos solo para abarcar el primer año y talvez se vuelve un poco aburrido o baja un poco su interés, aunque no mucho(igual opinion personal)

I love the story my only problem is the harem harem is not my kind of thing but this is really fun to read because I've seen a lot of novels with harem so it got kinda bland for me now

Come back. we need more story. (/$&;)/7&/$3$8736)/$&!:)$:& :!!),!/&82)/$ Please sir may we have another chapter or 100 More. I just wanted you to know that I love this

Really enjoying the story you’ve got here so I hope you continue with it very soon. Please and thank you ...................... ...................."............

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I really like this! However i am curious on why comments need to be a whole one hundred and forty characters long to post. Seems kinda dumb. That should probably be enough characters now.

In this story, the main character is a Chinese psychopath who migrated as Harry Potter. The story tries to be grim.. but it was only stupid. Harry Potter with a gun kills a Troll??? P. S: I came across this piece of shit on a Chinese website. I can say one thing - this fan fiction sucks!