The updating is too slow... I normally don't do reviews on post, but I had to do a review on this.... After the last chapter, I left for more than six months and only two to three chapters are posted... The story is very great and it's worth following but the updates needs to be a little faster
Although the book is interesting the rate at which the chapters are entering can make it boring...quickly leading to people dropping this and you can just read this for free on the Lightnovel app
great story, but author updates MAYBE once a month. Even on his Patreon, which is ridiculous. last I checked, he was making over $1500 a month for less than a chapter a month.
Sorry to tell the author this but he is ruining a great novel in the aim of greed he hardly puts any work and releases four chapters a month and yet he is asking for such a high price for patreon. This is just a kind note but if he wants this story to grow and rival with others at top ten he should be willing to put In the work of at least releasing two chapters a day
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if your looking for a Great World building and the most funny system interaction i have read to date, then this is your Must read, and personally, i love every chapter, and i recommend it to everyone, but i absolutely need more chapters than just 1 per week at best
The writing and development of both characters and the world is very good. Little to no errors in grammer or spelling. Not to mention all of it is free. My only issue is that it updates really slow, but this is most likely due to making sure the writing is amazing, which, once again, it is so I am patient.
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Bro ur work is great. I mean I don't miss a single minute after it has been updated but your updating needs to be a little bit... Oh who am I kidding, a lot faster. Other than that, your novel is awesome in all possible ways man. ππ
writing: 5/5 so far it's good and you would understand them over your pov
Story Development: 2/5 since you know the update wasn't that stable that you would easily lose their plot.
Character: 4/5 so far, the characters were all good and they have this unique personality that would make you love/hate them at the same time
Updating: is decent, You see the problem is the Update but it wasn't like the others where they would just drop it because they were lost in the story or don't know how to configure them.
World background: The world background absolutely catch my attention, but I wouldn't say I love them, since the other place wasn't very detailed...
It's just my own conclusions...
WOW I THOUGHT YOU DROP THIS BOOK
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