Its pretty great for a fun little fan fic, its not like the dude writing is a professional or anything and I have been enjoying this as a bit of stupid fun, keep up the good work :D
So, a monster of the 1st floor could use his own body to defend what may as well be a divine sword compared with anything in his body? Even weapons sold by a novice blacksmith (those who can make something that can be sold) can cause injury to them so her sword being blocked does not really makes sense.
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