Reviews of *Hiatus/Dropped/Writer's Block* Naruto - A Cursed System by Nubbeh - Webnovel

it would be good if you forget about the fact that he had a shattered mind skill that should have have affected his psyche and personality. otherwise he is an utter #**# in this story that you made amazingly. oh and him liking a centipede and calling it cute then saying I will kill you to the said centipede does not seem to be enough to justify his shattered mind skill. he is needlessly childish like bruh tone it down. and do not make him TOO MUCH enthusiastic about meeting plot characters like come on bruh currently he is way too much of a a$$kisser. with all that said and done your fic is good but it could be WAY better if you pay attention to your oc's pros and cons, how much attention he will get, his first impressions, and how will he deal with butterfly effect.

It is amazing you should continue it anyway I feel like you wanted Yukio to just get stronger with less details cause when we saw his stats raise high while he was doing a parkour course it was like how and what happened I need details DETAILS[img=coins]

muy buena historia, original e interesante, aunque algo cargada de información innecesaria es bastante entretenida y espero mas capítulos, buena novela¡¡¡¡ 9/10

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This novel is a great fanfic with a lot of good ideas. The main character has a lot of personality and is funny at times. I still look forward to how the story will progress in the rain. So far, there has been some non-canon content with Akatsuki and Jujitsu Kizen which is in my opinion, the best part of fanfics like these. I also loved that interaction woth Gojo.

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○

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