Reviews of The Genesis Trilogy by Allen_Clay012 - Webnovel

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KuyaImbo
Good read, and good story by the author. What i want to point out is the intriguing storyline, the backstory and lore seems interesting and also the worldbuilding. One thing that can be improved is the writing style, specially the exchange of dialogues between the characters. There are also some grammar mistakes, but they're so minimal that they don't affect the overall reading experience. Overall, the story is great and has lot of potential. Will definetely keep this to my list as I wait for more chapters to be published.
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B_l_a_n_k_2167
World design and its background could use some work, and for sure everything is you did was best your writing skill to your imagination was pure.
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Vanilla_Chino
I wish there were more chapters so I could write a proper review. So far the story seems to be flowing well and the characters mentioned have great potential. The worldbuilding is intriguing and I enjoyed what little I got to get a taste of. Keep it up author, ill keep this one on the lookout.
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Allen_Clay012
This story has been revised so old reviews are now deleted for relevance. I rated this as high as five stars because of the effort I made in writing this story. Overall there may be changes that will be made in the future. So far I liked this version of the story better. Please read and post your reviews and feedback. I greatly appreciate if you do! Thank you!
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Darkodia
An epic saga of war and survival, this story masterfully blends interstellar conflict and ancient mysteries, capturing the relentless struggle of humanity against a seemingly invincible foe.
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Cinna_4
I will say that I am very interested in the worldbuilding of the story. It's probably the most intriguing aspect of it. I do think the dialogues could be better and delivered more smoothly. That said, there is big potential for the story to be way better than it is now. I have faith that the author can improve this series and make it peak. Good luck!
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Akemi_Kyoshi
Interesting read! I'm just on the first three chapters but so far I can't wait to see where this goes! Aside from a few quirks here and there the story has major potential so keep up the good work!
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FryingDragoon
A few minor errors here in there mostly when it comes to tenses and sentence structures. Nothing that can't be corrected easily though. I do admire the originality of the plot and I encourage author-san to dive deeper into the storyline and surprise me even more. It can be a bit confusing to understand the world at first but it gets clearer later on, due to author-san's efficient descriptions.
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