Reviews of Eternal Mana (Hiatus) by Eatcelery - Webnovel

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It started generic and went downhill from there. Why Asian novels lack any character development? Why add characters that are not important? And never used? Interesting slow idea that didn't turn out to be any good.

Low review cause crummy dude reviewing every other day 5 stars, not what its for -------------------------------'----- supercalifragilisticexpaladocius

Good Story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Till now it is an well written novel. Highlights of this novel are system, premise of story and pace of the story. Mc is above average character (nothing too special but not irritating or naive). Hope author completes this novel.

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Celery! The first chapter is really well written. The description of everything is point and it got engaging the moment you wrote "the stick he proudly called a fishing rod." 😂

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Once upon a time, there was a transmigrator who wound up as a mere ten year old boy in a land he had pretty much no information about. The only thing he had was a system and that OP system gave him the keys to the kingdom! Follow our intrepid hero as he navigates his way to becoming the most overpowered cultivator/mage (as well as the first!) while trying to stay low-key. (Because right now, storywise, he's still about 12-13)

I thought this was a litrpg style novel but then it took a different route. I know its hard mixing rpg elements and wuxia elements. Sometimes if you focus too much on rpg the wuxia/cultivation part suffer and vice versa leaving the readers confused. I was digging the daily tasks system giving it a light litrpg style feel. Not to grindy but still there. But then it just disappeared. And lots and lots of info dump about the cultivation world shoved to you. It feels like the author just gave up on the system.

For being a story that needs to be tested using guinea pig readers such as myself I am genuinely happy. It has great story progression and world building and actually slowly builds up each of the characters making them memorable to the story. Even though the story seems to develop slowly I think otherwise because it shows each step the mc takes to get even the slightest bit stronger. Even the system the mc has is well balanced and fair and actually makes the mc work hard rather than making the mc instantly strong and destroying story progression. Lastly, this story seems to have daily updates which I love and can’t wait to continue reading. Cheers to the magnificent author sensei!

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Quite a nice idea of a novel with mixed system and cultivation. There are some minor flaws, especially some major in my opinion event are skipped with only rudimentary mention, but it's a pleasant read.

I've read a lot of light novels and I don't know about you guys but it gets redundant sometimes. This story is really fun and so far I haven't started skimming the chapters out if boredom. Keep up the good work Author

This is a really high quality story thats well built and has alot of worldbuilding no easily discernible grammar/spelling mistakes. Interesting plot and a steady progression of the protagonist. If you like a protagonist who isnt overpowered from the start but gets stronger as the story progresses then you should read this book

I have no words to describe how great this story is. If you're on the fence about giving this story a shot, give it a try. You won't regret it.