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Mellize
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Mellize

I’m sorry it took me so long to give this wonderful novel a review, I’m the type to take my time in reading and digesting everything that was happening the novel. I gotta say: you took my breath away with your rich-detailed and stunning writing style. I’m being biased and all, but I’m definitely fond of very intricate and eloquent storytelling such as this one! Also, your story pacing and transitions flow smoothly like a lake that I hadn’t noticed a single thing that felt out of place and continued on reading. Not to mention, the glossary definitely helped me as I read through your novel as well as the notes at nearly every chapter. Ugh, it’s so hard to discern which characters are my favorite ones: all of them have different, endearing or intriguing characteristics, motives, and tales which is why it’s so hard to pick from any of them. Yeah, I’ll just continue reading and see. Man, your setting and world-building are so brilliant! From the King’s round table of knights, the foreign language, the demons and monsters. All of them are nicely done; normally, a lot of authors tend to info-dump their readers (hence why I only put such glimpses of details through a character’s actions, words, etc and not into the actual storytelling much), but you! You pulled it off so well that I haven’t felt the least bit of exhaustion from knowing so many details! Overall, I’m taking a huge liking to this novel. I can see a lot of effort put into it and that I look forward to reading more of this novel!
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neaht3
As a writer myself, I would like to say that this story can be enriching for writers - its style, its power of language, and its creativity. I recommend this novel; however, the reader should really understand that this story deep and symbolic. I have had readers, and I only assume that there are readers here too, who asked or wished names were easier or shorter. However, I disagree. The names are well picked as every word is carefully selected. The story also drops hints all over the place, for these who pay attention. So, whoever reads this - take your time. Do not rush through it, the story has deep roots and offers a well-developed world. Hierarchy system, and even its very own language. I can also say that this novel has a slightly invisible effect on the reader - teaching language, history and even mythology. And as I am a sucker for these, I cannot give it less than a five out five. Well done!
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mrmrcia
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mrmrcia

I understand that this book might be quite the difficult read, being that there are a lot of unfamiliar words and the phrasings are quite lengthy. However, I would just like to impart the wonderful feeling of knowing new words to whoever comes by this novel. (I know my work doesn't deserve 5 stars, but I'm shameless. ^^)
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Shaele
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Shaele

Hard to give a proper review after chewing through the first few chapters of the story, however as I promised here are my thoughts. There writing quality is superb, almost to the point that it's too good, and moves away from the quality you expect from this genre, and gets into the territory of heavy literature. You have take your time and go through the auxiliary, as there's a lot of thought behind the world that was built here. Yes, this one requires you to invest some of your time, before you can enjoy, but if you soldier through, you can enjoy the superb descriptive writing, and the story that although starts as a trope, it has its depth. Eh, in short, good job, great story, love the effort that went into creating this book!
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Overlord_Venus
One word, WOW! Just WOW!!! The author's language skills is simple beautiful. I almost wanted to cry while reading the chapters. Coming to the storyline, I found the plot progression interesting. It looked like there was a hidden plot that was progressing slowly through the chapters and we as the readers could only realise the surface plot. Or, maybe, that is just my feeling? Anyway, I enjoyed this book. I am adding it to my library and will enjoy it daily.
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NotAGoblinSlayer
This story got my attention because the ML have the same name with a character from the novel To Kill a Mocking Bird by Harper Lee... this was kind of hard to read with all the unfamiliar words but it was fun searching them up, I don't like the author for placing cliff hangers. Why is the Empress' name still not stated..?
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Rana_Quinn
I like how the author has a very clear vision of the world and is able to translate it into words. I can sense that the author is gifted with imagination and combine that with top-notch technical skills that the readers will have no choice but be sucked into the world of chaos and fantasy.
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Aizen_Dleitch
Emperor Hector Atticus Seraphiel and his knights of the Round Table. This novel is glorious with its own articulate language and beautiful medieval tone. Though I know I will never be able to perfectly repeat the words used in this story perfectly I must say 'Ohnus' to the Author. Now then onto the Review. -Writing Quality- This story's writing is beautiful with the combination of its own vocabulary and unique style of speech only small words missing and the rare case of a misspelled word remains. Personally I didn't know what to make of the writing on the first chapter however proceeding forward I began to love it. -Stability Of Updates- Only reading three chapters I can not say much personally however with only a short pause at the beginning this author is clearly very dedicated. -Story Development- I enjoy the System that was set up by the Author without being explained in an Info Dump. The Emporer cares for his people and the Knights are free to judge on his behalf without any communication shows that this is a System built on the trust between members. All together this truly is what I would consider amazing Story Development. If I had to point out one issue however is that during narration I sometimes got lost on who was speaking. -Character Design- The fact the Author takes their time to describe the characters in a slow but fitting pace is breathtaking. For some reason no matter what I can only imagine exactly what the author described especially when it came to the Emporer and the Beautiful Leticia. -World Background- Clearly a lot of time was put into developing this world and it seems the Author already has everything planned out. As we went on we were introduced to many characters but they all seemed important and in no way rushed or put to the side. Although I slightly spoiled myself reading the Auxiliary chapters first the world-building is very well done. If I had to point out one thing it would be the minor issue of details being mixed in with narration of a scene making things slightly confusing to the reader.
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Archwriter
The Requiem of An Empress. To be honest, I didnot expect the novel to be this informative. It even has its own language. This narrating style of the author which can catch the attention of any reader....I'm deeply impressed. This deserves five stars. The world building is amazing and I shall not be presumptuous as to question the Author's grammars. Each and every characters are delicately designed and they have their own unique roles. A benevolent Emperor and an Empress who is mourned for.....Great job Author! I hope you continue to publish more chapters faster. And another thing to those whose English is Amateur level I suggest....Get a Dictionary and read slowly!
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Aciee_GelaTin
The narration is very impressive. I really appreciate the amount of efforts that the author poured into this since this story contains a lot of unfamiliar words. The character design is also fascinating. The plotline is unique. Last but not the least, it makes use of an amazing descriptive. It's a wonderful read!
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TheViking5500
I must say I'm not a fan of these type of novels, but this novel is an exception. It's really good and there are so many times I felt like my level of English wasn't good enough when reading this novel! I must say this is a very good novel and I hope you carry on with this exceptional story author!!
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Blackcrust
Hi Everyone !! Oh my god... The Vocabulary this author uses is a real art in itself. The new words, Sanskrit terms, chapter name, and medieval mythological beings. Just one word 'Awesome'. I can feel, the amount of effort each chapter would take. It's massive. To build a plot around the story, so that it would not conflict the original premise later can turn into a real headache, but so far I can see that pace of the story is smooth. World Building is very profound and logical, once again the amount of effort is hard to comprehend. It's very well planned out. Every character has their own personality and quirks. The language fits so well with the world setting and the characters. I am really impressed by the way the author makes the narration mythical and enticing and puts life into the characters. Loved your work.
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Mirilidan
This book has been amazing, very descriptive and uses unique words you rarely see as well as some invented ones too (so be sure to read the auxiliary chapters) The author paints a vivid picture with each paragraph and you can mentally visualize each scene that is happening. It is what I would call a novel with true substance.
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CatSnitch
I love your story. Though there are a lot of names and characters but the more, the merrier. The mixture of history, religion, fantasy and reality is great. I can be confused at the first chapter but I tell you, I enjoyed reading this. Currently on the 6th chapter but will try to finish it up until the current chapter.
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Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Great writing quality. Easy to understand what the author was trying to convey to the readers. The story was very immersive. World background and the character design, all were there, and as great as the writing quality. Good job author-san.
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Poisonlily
This novel is extremely good! Pardon me for my lack of vocubolary and grammar errors but Honestly, the story itself is well written and the characters are very intriguing and entertaining. The writing style is so good that the words the author wants to convey is direct. Although, there's a lot of deep wordings here and there but thanks to the author, leaving a note in every chapters and glossary, it helped me a lot. If you want to have a great novel to read as well as learning new words every chapters... READ THIS NOVEL. The world background is also constructed really well and very detailed!! ❤️❤️❤️😘 ❤️😘❤️😘😘😘 To the AUTHOR, SHOUMA is YOURS now.❤️❤️😘😘😘
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minho_Shiny
Wow!! The writing quality is top notch. I think I should learn some tips from you. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more.This book straight goes into my library I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.
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ThirtyTyrants
A very immersive story with a very developed setting and fascinating characters. I especially like the concept of the demons and their original forms verging on the grotesque. The descriptive writing style really shines in these sections in my opinion. There's a very large cast of interesting characters all with their own agendas and motivations, that makes me curious about how everything will come together when these different interests clash. The world is very intrincate and the information about its inner workings and different conflicts is revealed slowly through each chapter making the reading experience feel much more immersive. The only fault I can find is that the writing gets unnecessarily wordy at times, without adding much to the mood of the story or the character's moods and feelings. However, words aren't used out of place and this is merely a matter of preference, that many readers could find enjoyable.
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Sun23
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Sun23

The story is very wordy. But I love how the sentences in the story looks very medieval. Which fits the setting of the story. However, it wasn't easy to fully understand each chapters because some of the difficult vocabularies used. I appreciated how you put and clarified these vocab at the end of each chapters along with some details ( story setting, characters name etc.) before the story start. The story starts with a prologue chapters which was pretty confusing on my part as I move along to read the rest of the chapters. I wasn't sure who the main character was. I went back to reread the synopsis and assume that the empress is the main character or perhaps there maybe be more that one. However towards the latest chapters, the mysterious empress pop-up was something that tug my interest. Who is this empress!? Lol, very interesting. It does take some time to get to the juicy part of the story. Nonetheless, I understand the beginning details must be a crucial setting to the story. It won't be fun if there's no hook to draws the reader in. In overall, a very descriptive and details story. Good luck, I will be waiting for the next chapters.
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RaSi

This novel is written very well, and story flow is just amazing. Aside from writing style the story is quite intriguing. Hope author posts more updates soon...
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ozzybanks
Eloquently written, and beautifully immersive in its delicate attention to detail. I definitely enjoy the dynamic of this conversation driven story. It is tense and enticingly deep, alluding to an incredibly well thought out world. The dark themes of this novel provide a weighty substance and a lovely contrast with the prim and proper dialogue. I would recommend this novel for anyone that wants to get stuck in to a deep and beautifully written fantasy with gritty substance.
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Mel_Aniv
Subarashi! Amazing! The author has a great descriptive skill rivalling an english poet!. I was a fan of the author's way of writing. It flows like water in a brook. I hope you will review mine called Lumia: Other World. Happy reviewing!
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Omo_Comforts
I love your storyline and everything. I love the way you describe every little detail. This has a spot on my collection. The amount of detail it has is fantastic. I love every little detail about it
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TokyoAnime_Seven
The writing style it's damn smooth it's like Butter flow writing with vivid description. Only one sentence was enough to attract the readers attention and make him finish all the chs. Aside from writing style the story is quite intriguing. Good job author.
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hitmeup
i'm new at webnovel so i rely on recommended books then saw this on LTDCAG author's suggestion i'm like sure yeah i'll check it and HELL YAS! it didn't disappoint me at all ❤️ I absolutely love the book cover, the character names and everything! i mean we all know that fantasy novels are like one of the hardest sh*ts to do bcz u need to make your research about words and stuff and most importantly you need to make readers imagine and this made mee! definitely going to read more of this! nice work keep it up ❤️
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EldritchTheDead
I’ve got nothing to say except, remarkably fantastic! From the way he described and wrote the scenery to the interesting conversations, is simply astounding. Readers like myself would rarely find grammatical errors! I would definitely recommend! The author seems to be greatly experienced in writing. Also thanks for reviewing mine! Seeing your work ensued my motivation to write better. Hope we will keep supporting each other!
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Yang_Shin
I have read various fantasy novels and comics. I have been looking for variety because I can pretty much predict what will happen next which is boring because it takes away the supposed thrill the novel or comic has to offer. True enough a friend of mine recommended me this novel. At first, I was not very much interested because I thought it was cliched but turns out, the novel proved me wrong. I liked how the world background and setting was intricately designed and established in the series. I also liked the character concepts, especially Atticus. His ironclad conviction to save his kingdom at all cost. The reason I had put 4* for the character development is that I feel that the characters have more development in the future updates. I am looking forward to them especially, Haniel. She's my personal favorite among the Round Table Knights.
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taxi_pineapple
I love your story line and everything! A big thumbs up from me! This definitely has a spot on my collection, good job author, let’s keep on working hard!
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restful_sins
The profound amount of detail and didication to the feelings to build the story it felt as if i was in the MC's shoes for the duration of the chapters.
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Mandeep_Singh_780
So before writing my review I want to say I am not huge fan of romance and Fantasy. But when read it i found many things that i like such as human vs demon,People fighting for order etc and knights who don't like them. I didn't notice any flaw in grammer. The pacing was so smooth like silk. While reading imagine what is going on and you will like this even more. Other than that i think writer has a lot of experience in writing. My review many not look pretty or shiz but i put my mind into it and wrote with honestly.
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