Reviews of Marvel's Shinobi by DreAm_b0At - Webnovel

great stuff. thanks for the time and effort. ................................................................................................................

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way to many cliches.way to many cliches.way to many cliches.way to many cliches.way to many cliches.way to many cliches.way to many cliches.

It's pretty bad, not gonna lie. Not in the mood for putting in effort for an actual review, so here are some bullet points for you to consider before taking a plunge into the sewer...I mean, story: - this is NOT a shinobi system you might be foolishly expecting, like I did. It is naruto system that sells bloodlines and techniques for peanuts - MC is an enormous Mary Sue that *apparently* is the most perfect genius in anything and everything even before getting the system, despite being a braindead monkey - a ton of important stuff just pops out of nowhere, getting mentioned once before either being promptly forgotten and ignored or outright retconned into something else the very next chapter - one second MC is an ***** reincarnator, then it turns out he transmigrated into a dead kids body, then it turns out that actually the kid was the kid all along (what a twist!) but with some random dude's memories that he has AND doesn't have at the same time (what?). Oh and by the way - all of this happens in a single chapter - MC is (wait for it!) a 10-y.o. kid. In highschool. Also a murderhobo. And chuuni. And a veritable cringelord. I'd continue this disjointed list, but that's just asking for aneurism. - this fic is where logic goes to die, nothing makes any sense or follows any rhyme or reason There's *a lot* more here to discuss, enough to make an essay... But I can't be arsed. If everything listed above wasn't enough to scare you off, then you are clearly the target audiense and will most likely enjoy this...hmmm..."abomination" is a good word, describes it neatly.

dear author-kun great book so far very interesting I've only read a few books like this one and only a few of them are as good as this one. keep it up ☺️👍

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Mc is a fool. Instead of using brain to think he use his dick just for a girl.

babysitting fanfic, the MC doesn't exist.

Bad. Not chaning cannon. Doing nothing.Bad. Not chaning cannon. Doing nothing.Bad. Not chaning cannon. Doing nothing.Bad. Not chaning cannon. Doing nothing.

honestly, it's bad...do yourself a favour and dont read it...its an absolute waste of time. the mc was an otaku average human being out of nowhere is able to kill without batting an eye...then there is this absolute bullshit time skip to point mc is suddenly at the cusp of *****hood...he gets a boring ass oc love interest...yes u heard me an oc love interest in the brilliant world of the marvel universe where there are soo many brilliant women in this world...after the time skip chapters get smaller and quality is also drastically dropped..mc is also sidelined for quite a number of chapters where spiderman pretty much becomes mc...quite a bit hand holding...I even saw one chapter heading where he will train the fuckin of love interest who is a regular human...pretty sure he ll give something from the damned system...**** this...this type of bullshit is one of the reasons why I absolutely hate oc love interest and system novels...fuckin stupidity

whatever happened to a warriors path? it was a good story i like. it was probably what happens to most authors "hater syndrome". how i hate those haters, ruining good books by sh#ting on books and make the author fall into depression and eventual drop and suicide. dam haters the bane of all good things. like seriously i read a book and look at the reviews i see about 90% haters when it's a good book, then when i see those endorsed novels by webnovel it's mostly some type of romance or something similar.

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one of the better fan fiction's ive read its well thought out timed etc. its worth a read hopefully it will more chapters soon and now I fill in space for character counter

shadow clones with academy level chakra and wrong hand signs. Shop where you can buy everything and he earns the currency by killing. Even a random thug gives 0-1 currency. Asura bloodline only costs 200 full rinnegan for less than 400.

since I am a good person, I give 5

The author is dumb, MC is dumb too. the system force you to kill to get point, 1 life : 1 point. It did not specify what you have to kill, just 1 life : 1 point. MC can kill ants, cockroaches, or other insects, however he just go and kill peoples at age 10 and he didn't even bat an eye eventho he was just otaku and orphan. I don't know if he found the system loophole or not but I decided to drop it since I can't stand to read it anymore

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If you are loking at the other reviews and thnkiong you shouldnt read this because of them then I will say they are all wrong. I have read other works of this author (my first time reivewing). Normaly I review only few fics that have touched me in some kind of way (good or bad) this fic didnt achieve that. But I have decided to review simply because others are saying nonsense while this is great pice of work. Not the top of the top there are few issues but people who give this guy any lower that 3,5* are insane. This is head and shoulders above what this site usually has. Grammar is almost perfect and story is entertaining. Others talk about babysitting and whatnot but author is clearly writting other POW-s with great success. Not there is another point which I would like to make author has a finished fic on this site and doesnt delete reviews (I hate those authors the most). Now that I got out of the way I would like to talk about the things I didnt quite like. Time skipping. Yes a time skip of 8 years was too long and uneccesary IMO he developed a lot of abilities but problem is he doesnt have any good enemy or fight scene. I like reading good fight scenes hope author writtes few of those in future. True inner gates are cool concept I like its similar to few other fics I liked. Romance is meh IMO people of this site read too many wuxias to writte good romance. SO I never expect much from it I like that he only has 1 girl cuz harem stories most time develop in smuts with an ocasional copy pasted enemy/villan. Anyway if person reading this review is thinking should they or should they not read it I hope I have answered that question for you. Author Good Luck and Have Fun :D

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Autour, i sure do love other novel “The Warriors Path”😭😭😭😭😎 i really miss This novel. Although you drop it, It still have more than 200 chapter in the end. That just show that you are devoted as an author.

I like The Warriors Path and the Demon Slayer fan-fic. If it is written by this author then I think I might like it. Questions before I read this: Is their a Kekkai Genkai limit for the MC? Does he start off OP or is it progressive and shows character building? Does he automatically start with the sharingan? Are their contingencies to prevent cloning or using the MC's DNA for anything nefarious. Finally, Is it good? Thanks.

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Hmm nice. Good chapters. And good story. Really liking the story so far. I am excited to read more of this story.Hmm nice. Good chapters. And good story. Really liking the story so far. I am excited to read more of this story.

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