Reviews of Overpowered Irregularity (Pause)

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4.51

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AraAra
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1yr
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Riyanda_Knehan
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MajorParidae
I'm sorry, but why does this have such a high rating? The premis for the story is fine, theres many similiar ones and this has a good and intersting start. I don't mind a bit arrogant and chill OP MC, having read many such stories. But the stucture of the sentences is awkward and weird very often. I recommend fixing that and/or asking for editor/proofreader. If english isn't your first language, then definitley ask for an editor or do checks for the writing often, comparing results on the net. Maybe do some fact check, like about the existance of guilds in the past and the difference of that time, though it can be glossed over as little AU quirk, just like Grayfia and Sakuya being there. Also a bit more detailing on the going ons, as the situations and character interactions are very simple at the moment, making the characters lack dept.
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PeteAlmighty
I did enjoy this story, it has some short chapters but I liked it. Being dropped is saddening. I truly hope the Author gets better soon so that we can continue to enjoy this story.
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Ginlk
LV 4

Ginlk

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Ginlk
LV 4

Ginlk

Queria que o mc foΓ§e mais pervertido...... πŸ˜’πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜‡πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜’πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜•πŸ˜―πŸ˜―πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜†πŸ˜―πŸ˜‡πŸ˜’πŸ˜ πŸ˜’πŸ˜―πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜―πŸ˜†πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜•πŸ˜―πŸ˜ πŸ˜’πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜†πŸ˜―πŸ˜†πŸ˜’πŸ˜‡πŸ˜’πŸ˜ πŸ˜―πŸ˜―πŸ˜’πŸ˜†πŸ˜―πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‚πŸ˜†πŸ˜’πŸ˜ πŸ˜’πŸ˜΄πŸ˜•πŸ˜΄πŸ˜‘πŸ˜πŸ˜†πŸ˜’πŸ˜’
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AussieWizard
Haven't read the book but I was bothered this is fairytale but has dxd picture, don't know the concept behind the story so the mold maid could be in it but I am far too lazy to read this
1yr
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Ginlk
LV 4

Ginlk

Affs When I need you Power Stone to be able to "vote" I do not have aff This WebNovel is giving PowerStone very little, gogo galera bora to make protest in discord of webnovel.
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Sonra
LV 5

Sonra

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Dark_Ace_69
Nice one...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘great to readπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
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BFive
LV 4

BFive

I think this book is very good. the protagonist has the same charisma as someone I know. thick and somewhat perverted characters are the best. please give more chapters: v.
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KieraRz
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EijiSeishuu
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