Chapter comments on the chapter Battle of Eastfell of the book Prime Originator

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FunnyBuns
You know I was eating during this chapter, it is really hard to eat when you are laughing pretty hard.
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InquisitorCrusader
I hope they don't get captured for a moment of dumbassery... 🤔 I thought the Queen taught them strategy and how to war since she hoped for them to help the MC
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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Presentformula
A big change in tone during this chapter
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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FunnyBuns
I feel I should clarify, I wouldn't like it if these jokes replaced some of the story. Adding them in is fine and all, like when Crazy Don got trapped on the second floor and had to eat the ants which caused the diarrhea as ultimately it didn't take up much space and it basically set it up so Crazy Don's little attempt at revenge had some serious consequences, both good and bad.
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