Chapter comments on the chapter Going Out of the book The Boy in the All-Girls' Chat Group

Incest

Your release consistency is admirable, but you need to pay more mind to the basics of composition. The most glaring issues seem to be tense shifts and plain prose. I'll write up a full review for you soon.

Dont made kaith like sora pls.. A jealous brocon imouto is a fcking nightmare

Stupid incest..

Interaction with one another is alright could not do is add her to romance route she fam man

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Thanks for this bab

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good

i am need sister moe~it will beacome good