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4.52

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Tunahan
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Tunahan

There is not much to say to my own book so thanks for reading my book and this senseless comment. Δ°f you found a mistake or want to give your advice, that would be great for me. This is my first writing a book/novel so every help counted
4yr
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BigNovelBigDream
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Lukas_West
Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!Update! Update Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!
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zd4zaaa
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dudeoftitties
Update or give the book to someone cause I really like it and want it to continue until its complete. Please don't let it die. I'll give you my free passes?
3yr
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Jepsx
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Jepsx

Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.
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Elina_K
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Drifting_Clouds
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
4yr
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demioch
I'll be honest I'm rating it 5 because I'm hoping you will continue this book and keep it going although its been awhile since an update I sincerely hope you can keep this story going or because not only is it good ( a lot of people like r18 scenes as well just saying) but it also has an interesting way of developing I'll be waiting for updates I hope you have a good day by the way and happy thanksgiving
4yr
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Piotr_Uklejewski
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
4yr
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Cragens
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Cragens

good novel, it reads very well, the story is consistent and interesting waiting for the next parts. Bardzo dobrze siΔ™ czyta. ,......,.........,......,..,.................................,......
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4yr
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THEIMMORTALDhantos
badbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadBADBADBADBADBAD. NOt update how cruel life is
4yr
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Drifting_Clouds
Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update !
4yr
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BookDeity
this novel gives me Far Cry Primal vibes πŸ˜‚ 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999
4yr
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Quinlan_Lightfoot
I’m hoping there’s an update soon as it is a fun book. The world is interesting and there is a lot left to discover, the story is a bit fast paced but the Author has said he will work on it.
4yr
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ryeshl
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ryeshl

My type of novel with decent character and world building. Hope to have more consistent updates πŸ‘ You can push the smithing levelling a bit more as I love skill developement and the MC's levelling process. Keep up the good work!
4yr
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EijiSeishuu
4 week no update -,- .........................................................................................................................................
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Drifting_Clouds
Keep it up looking forward to that mass release. Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go Let's Go!!!
4yr
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AmbientHoratio
I love the idea, the system and the structure. This story is one of my favourites on webnovel. My 2 wants are: A regular upload time. A story that progresses with good arcs, and appropriate scaling.
4yr
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Asaad92darknorth
thank for your hard work. recommended...............................................................................................................................................
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DaNepz
Is actually pretty good. I like the story so far.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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DD8DD
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DD8DD

Very good Very good very good this novel good story good refresh rate I recommend I put it in the library πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ
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Yanorth
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Yanorth

This novel is just fantastic, I'm can see a few grammar errors but isn't that bad, loving the idea of the novel, I'm love any novel with craft system
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Meow_catsdontlie
Its a good read i guess. But there’s not really a clear plot. No real motivation. Also for a smith who can easily make things he just buys everything. So honestly everything is too relaxed making it slightly unrealistic. Dont know something just doesnt feel right. Nothing much really captivating my interest I guess.
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Daoist93
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TheFluffyMan
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Saisad_sadad
It is interesting story,good development, stability update, so far so good for me I hope the author keep writing (pls don't drop this) Thank you
4yr
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TheCeddel
I also really enjoy the Setup and hope, that you can keep up the good work. It has a really unique worldbuilding and a good amount of Slice of Live which I enjoy. The Action has also a nice timing, so that you don't get bored and just thinking about what he will build next is keeping me tense.
4yr
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MrSnow
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MrSnow

So far im really enjoying this, keep up the good work, love both the story and premise just maybe clean up the "status" and especially "quest" screens a bit
4yr
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