Chapter comments on the chapter Father can't die of the book Handsome CEO'S Bewitching wife

Unfortunately, the chapters don't flow together at all. This creates a broken and stuttered narrative that is not only difficult to follow, but prevents logical plot progression. Too many characters have been introduced in a short period of time, as well; no character has the time to have their personality properly developed, making it hard to tell them apart in a reasonable manner.

Uhm why is FL so dumb? Lol

I just started reading your novel but I feel like she is dumbed to see the reality...but i hope you will make her character stronger...hmmmm..i really like revenge stories..hmmmm...anyway lets see...

why the story really confusing..hurm..i will pass to read more..sorry author

You do realize you should have written all this before the betrayal from her boyfriend and bestfriend right? Now we don't know if she is in a coma and dreaming or you are going back. Everything has just turned from an interesting start to a bomb.

I forgot the reason why I removed this from my library after a few minutes of reading it. Now I remember, the grammar, narration, character, basically everything is wrong

I am really very confused. Coma caused by that so call best friend and boyfriend? While in coma dream of future? So know the face with or without scar?

Its confusing

I wish that the FL was a little smarter...... ＼(￣▽￣;)／

It's probably the boyfriend 😭 The nightmares she's having are probably things that might happen... Hopefully she uses that to her advantage to steer clear from those 2

I think you should give a title like 'another nightmare' or you should mention 'in her previous life', also, it's not mentioned if she's reborn or the horrible experiences were only her dream and an illusion.

Im so lost. Like everything is all over the place and we still havent found out why she’s in the hospital and if the nightmares happened or not.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Some typo errors and story not too clear to know the real plot.

Yes make him leave. Make him go back where he'd just come from!

i hope FL realise shes been reborn...i hope she will get her revenge

Whose face?

i wanted to continue reading but i am really confused none of the things happening can be connected. at first i thought it was me, but then after reading comment none of us has any idea whats going on.

Is she really stupid i do hope that the main character can be a wiser one