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Hanana1521
People will do anything, no matter how absurd, in order to avoid facing their own souls. One does not become enlightened by imagining figures of light, but by making the darkness conscious. Carl Jung, Psychology and Alchemy (Collected Works 12)
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INTP_L
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
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Kaifen
Thanks for the chapter
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Auronian
Thanks for the Chapter
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asiang
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asiang

Thanks for the Chapter
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salem277
Writer better not be planning on hooking mc up with the ex prostitute
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Crazy_Ghost
🍀🍀🍀🍀
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AbyssalVale
Wonder if he will cultivate
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Booker23de
Thanks for the chapter.
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Anes09
Thanks for the update
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Icevde
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Icevde

So after 20 ish chapters there is a lill world information and no real plot and its going slow. So how do you plan to keep readers if nothing is happening. Dont take it to hearts . Your novel is wrote well and mc is rather fun ny anf hillbilly nothing wrong .Just that the storie and The plott is missing basicly .
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Iamcheapsowhat
Thanks for the update
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