I’ve decided to review this novel even though it’s new and has only two chapters.
The storyline got me hooked.
Talking about the storyline, it’s quite unique and complicated as it states. The author has described every single detail which makes it easier for the readers to imagine and have an idea of the background setting. You have a excellent imagination, I can say that.
Coming to the grammar, there are a few grammatical errors in the chapters, it’s not that it cannot be edited. The sentence structure is fine. Overall, the usage of words is good and is perfect for one to imagine the scenes clearly. The more you write, the more you learn! :)
I cannot judge the stability of updates as I think the author must be busy plotting the storyline first. I will vote every time the author posts a chapter! >.>
Putting aside the official judgement, I personally love this book. I would recommend this to have a read of this book.
It’s complicated and amazing >.>
Happy writing!
More chapters please~
Alison35