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DaoistGgf6Zy
this was an interesting concept. It is a shame that it was dropped as the story was starting to gain some traction. I hope whatever you are going through turned out alright.
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No_Name_1524
Well, it's have a path to harem but maybe max is 5 heroine, it's also quite good, but not OP, more likely Weak to Strong and Moderate Paced, 🤔🤔, last chapter the author dropping all his work, he has talent for this but If this not fun for him, well that's doesn't good either, so all his reason is appropriate. Thanks for this fanfiction Author 🙏🙏🙏
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msyaifulloh2111
Aku membaca tulisan ini sebelumnya, lalu menjatuhkannya karena penulis tidak memperbaharui lagi. Hari ini aku membacanya lagi dengan harapan penulis akan melanjutkannya seperti penulis lain. Tapi ternya tidak. Kecewa, pasti. Tapi sekali lagi aku berharap penulis akan melanjutkan cerita ini, walaupun karakter Chris tidak sempurna, tapi sangat menarik ketika kita mengikutinya.
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12HCL
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Christalyn_Beheler
I loved this novel. I simply didn't want to put it down at all. The system was well done and I think you did pretty well on the characters. I don't know when you upload so I'll be checking out your channel to finish up the story.
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Boeira
It's not the best story, but If you can keep reading It will star to get interesting. The MC still need to develop more, but is going on a good path.
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Starmegalo
Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice but MC has no drive and just a potter head, like he is just living harry potter story but not his new life also pretty no sense he is not having any problem with characteristic of anyone
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lukeofdoom
Good book I like the fact that he put Hermione in the house she belongs and I like that the anther is changing thing about the original story
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LastGlance
First post on any Fiction site, why cut off Paragraphs in the first few chapters? It makes it annoying to read, i assume you are going to do it for the Rest of the chapters too, so ill Drop this
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DaoistZIJh4p
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vicky111mudi
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AmiOnigase
Sorry this story is so bad..
My head hurt read all this..
What with all this Prometheus and founders test. The MC is to realied to the system.
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ratted
I really like this novel and it has good outlooks and a fun system thing only problem is that in MY opinion (this is just my opinion I don’t mean to be rude or anything) the mc was kinda just handed everything at the beginning with having a special clan made just for him that is stronger than the Malfoys which seems a bit much it seems like his home life is just too good to be true and it makes the mc’s efforts seem pointless because he can just point and ask daddy to get him something this could be offset by having his parents be less of cardboard cut outs and having some personality issues and weren’t stereotypical cut outs of good parents and was an actual part of his story and not just a plot point to have the bad guys threaten him and get him angry as well as what feels like a shallow relationship with characters like Hermione which was moved to raven claw to be in the same house as the mc to try and reproduce a similar relationship between her and Harry in the original series. Really my only complaints are towards world building and character development. Overall a very cool series and the tying of Greek/Roman mythology, while it might bother some, I enjoy i think it’s neat.
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Hotshot_me101
It's Good to read and exited. I hope you can continue to write. It's great how to make it more lively. Honestly, I did not have many expectations but this writing turned out to be really well done and got me hooked on the story and this story is also a system novel which is what I love.
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ViciousHandler
Wasted my time reading to chapter 30. MC is suppose ******** fan of HP but is unable to see the true happenings a reasons for cannon HP. I especially got frustrated when it got to the point of author writing that the professors are choosing the brightest/capable/trustworthy students to teach dueling just to have the next chapter include F*cking Ron and Harry. Such force plot. HP and Ron are so mediocre!! Especially Ron!! Ron is below average and is accusing, jealous and lazy, slow witted. This FanFiction is too vanilla and forced. Author try’s to come up with ideas but is so force that it’s contradictory to the original characters the ones he/she is making. WASTE OF TIME!!!!
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Piotr_Uklejewski
******************************** Good work! ******************************************
***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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Smokerrrr
Well there is something I wanna share,author no offense.....well I don't care
1)system sucks it is limiting the growth of mc and mc feel he is getting stronger
Well he got pretty much good memory if mc word hard he'll get much power without the help of fucking system
2)author spends 50+ch repeating the same story of 1st yr Hogwarts 20% deviation
3)if only space time power is given to harmione than she will be much more overpowered from the fucking mc
4)I read whole ch+ hoping for something new & all I read mc begging for quest
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Demon_Writer
To me I have just started a little while ago, but I can already see that this a very good book that plays very well even though the author had to work very hard to write since he had to play off of the butterfly effect.
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Daoist721221
was good in the beginning but just got boring after awhile. It seems the author is at least trying to make a the story good.................
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David_Drake
The beginning has too much info dumping about the MC's system. Then the MC has an unhealthy interest in getting to know the main cast. It got boring after that and nothing really exciting happens besides fix-it moments. Not a bad story, but not a very interesting one.
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GreekAres
I really enjoy this LN, its kinda perfect. No errors in grammar, good story, a system that you need to work with (and doesnt make you op out of the gate), the MC is smart, calm, caring and im guessing he wouldnt have a problem with killing a follower of voldemort if he had to (I wish you could make a chapter explaining how Chris looks like, preferable handsome) and the overall story is good, i like that you make your own events instead of stealing Harry’s spotlight from the movies. Would give a 10/10 if not for the Uploading speed being a tad slow (Of course its no problem, i enjoy it enough to wait for the release)
I hope you dont drop this novel because it is soooo good
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MIKK
I love this novel, the only thing i want to see is chris being more boasting and more like a prodigy that everyone assumed he is, '' dumbledore's successor'' . I can't say i enjoy the greek mythology completely but it doesn't deter me from the story. All in all this is really good but requires a more regular chapter release.
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asaade_ragnarokm
trash the mc is on the side of light who can't kill an enemy who uses killing curse on them, only use non lethal spell on enemy that's trying to kill them
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Uncultured_PIG
I almost quit reading half through then I realized that it's getting interesting when you add some unexpected events. And its a good thing that your keeping the story in it's original plot.
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