Chapter comments on the chapter PLEASE FORGIVE ME of the book A Bizarre Adventure in Marvel

Black cat

Please understand that this is my first novel ever and I will understand if you believe if it is bad. Please give me good advice for a better story.

Why can't it be Black Cat, Black Widow and Skype same time. Could you let the MC steal the reality stone since doesn't need the rest unless you want the soul stone too.Pls let him steal at least one stone for himself.

Rip

What a ***** of a god..

god thinks hes so funny well he has the ability to create anything in that domain...and that includes bloodlines and since he can do w/e he wants while in the domain...no risk of fusing with said bloodline either...therefore win xD

Black cat

Haha you almost got me. I almost dropped the hell out of your novel with all those broken wishes but them I made it to the part where he'd have to train for that **** and I made it past your first chapter. Good going.

I mean, I don't really blame for wanting a power that op. The god did just tell him to pick ONE power. This is a pretty important decision and only one he gets so he needed to make it worth it. This is about his own survival in the marvel universe and a stand with powers like that will do the job well. ( I'll give you extra points for the mc to consider staying under the radar)

Psylocke :D

Thanks

not bad I hope you don't drop this