Good, story but i dont really get the story line you amlost have nothing but side charachter at the begining and dont hear anything of the main charackter.
This really a good story, I hope you continue it. The Story Development and Character design are also good. If I need to recommend a book, if not the first recommendation mainly because it is not finish.
This is a badass brilliant fanfic for Harry Potter. The chapters written to date (12) are phenomenal, particularly the depth of the first couple of chapters. Thereβs some brilliant world building and epically awesome background to the potter family and dumbledore which I wish was part of the main canon. This is a story that has hugely epic potential and I just hope the author continues to write it!!!
With what Iβve seen so far this is definitely going to be one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have read. Itβs background is amazing and in-depth and I love it for going deeper into how the Harry Potter world works.
Itβs good but itβs the stability when updating and he fsct itβs hard to get in a story thatβs as slow updating as this while also reading others... of the author picked up his writing speed this fanfic would honestly be on my top 30 list at 20ish in the placings.
You think you've read good HP fics, but you haven't read this.
6/5 for writing quality and world background.
It's overall a very impressive piece of work that you should at least have a go at, you owe it to yourself if you've had nothing to read but dry repetitive HP fanfics.
Really Really amazing story, i LOVE this storyline and nothing would change it, this is a MUST read in my opinion, itβs underrated. Please continue author!!!! ππππππ
The author totally screws the mc over. The guy reincarnated and then later the author wipes the mc memory and he becomes an idiot kid that can be manipulated and toyed with. The author spent chapters building up the mc's history and gets the reader involved with him the wipes his memory to just a regular 6 yr old, so it's pretty much a worthless story if your looking for a reincarnation mc. I will say the authors writing skills are great and grammar is spot on, he just kills the mc in the first few chapters with a memory wipe.
One of the worst fan fiction ever. I will not recommend this novel. I was like harry Potter has a brother. Well at the first the soul of are protagonist was in the brother. After some time the soul dies
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Fantastic strory, best Harry Potter Fanfiktion i've ever read. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉπΉ
I really can't say anything other than fantastic imagination!
The story begins a little rough, but you will see the author growing with the story. I love how different this one seems from others - I like to believe I read enough hp fanfics for this review to be trustworthy.
In case you didn't get it from the sentences above, I will be paying close attention to any updates.
So far it is the best harry potter story on webnovel, I hope it will stay as good until the end.
Hopefully it will not be dropped.
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I love this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
A wonderful story !
I am totally impressed by the way ,the author writes the story, the atitude of the characters is also very good until now and I have to say that the long chapters without fillers is a blessing ,the pace of the story is a tad bit slow and as for the update schedule it is very good and writing 25+ pages long chapters every 2nd to 3rd day is very appreciated.
Keep up the good work.
β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’β’Great story, a lot of originality and I like how you have incorporated the MC and added some common sense to the Wizarding world.
You have built such a wonderful story. As a writer I am in love with your story telling and way of pulling the reader into the emotions happening at the time. Keep up the great work!!!
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