at the i'm at in the i think why don't you put op mc tag on this cause his exponential growth in power is ridiculous thats what i think and make so he can have arch frames for arch frames so he can get ridiculous op
Was pretty good had some parts of Tenno I didn’t know or forgot about, but still seemed rush at the last 7 chapters. So in all I’ll give it all a 4.5 but I can’t do half stars on mobile so it’s 4 for now. Thanks for the ride on this story.(or as I see all story ideas a glimpse into the multiverse)
This Fan-Fic of Warframe is written pretty well. However, so far from what I've read it seems like the Author is merely following the plot that the Game has set already for players in-game. So it's incredibly boring and dry for those who've already played the game...
And some interactions that the main character has done so far seems extremely bland? For example when he is awoken by the Lotus, she is giving the Tenno a set of instructions as what to do, yet the protagonist just ignores her instructions, yet she has no reaction towards that. Like what? Is she just a computer for her to just keep repeating herself autonomously?😂😂 No, you have to giver her a breath of life. Make her react to the protagonist continuous ignoring.
Another example would be with the rescuing of Darvo. Everything happened so fast. The main character's interaction with Darvo was so dull, or better yet, there was hardly any interaction at all! The entire sequence was just:
1) Stealthily sneaks in grineer jail.
2) Stealthily kills a few grineers.
3)Stealthily saves Darvo
4)Stealthily gets to ship and leaves.
5) Bam! Mission complete, now onto the next mission.
Like what? 🤣🤣🤣
Tbh this Fan-Fic looks like it has potential, however you need to give it more life. Instead of the boring old Game Plot... cause so far it just seems like an explanation of what happens in the game...
Perfect for every warframe fan out there. The explanations can be confusing for everyone who doesnt' know Warframe, but I can assure you the author explained it as best as humanly possible, damn complicated sci-fi technology. World background is already existing.
Character is smart and relatable, except maybe with space-mom (😭) . Development is exciting as sky diving and release rate until now, is rather stable. Good job author :3
I absolutely love this novel and it’s so damn addictive!! The direction the story is going is soo good, and the character development is amazing!
And just because it’s about warframe also I’ll absolutely give this a five star!
Hope you never drop this novel until it’s completely finished!!!!
If your a fan of Warframe like me then you will definitely enjoy reading this fic. I myself have read several Warframe fics and in my opinion this is without a doubt the best one among them. I recommend reading this fic even without having knowledge about Warframe as the author explains about things quite thoroughly. Great job author and keep up the good work it’s much appreciated.
There is very few novels based on games (a side of wow)
as such i believe that novel of this kind is very interesting
and has a lot of potential
I also love to see that novel isn t completely based on game
so author has a lot of space to alter story/plot
As such autor can make this to 60+ chapters unlike most of fan-fic
novels where authors half way find out it is dead end :)