Ficou muito bom, porém eu acho que ele poderia ter alguma besta divina
Recém-nascido para nutri - la e quando a besta ele/ela crescesse pudesse ajudá-los em sua jornada para o pico do mundo ou do cultivo.
Cool idea but in my opinion totally ruined it with the multiple protagonists but that’s just my personal bias given that it’s got the library of heaven’s path i can’t give it a lower rating than a 3.
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So i Guess i wasted my time? Reading the first two chaps with ranks and stuff. the thing that ruined It for me is her yep her Plus i feel like its just gunna get worse with 2 main charcters the author has to have Them grow from experince which would Mean double the work but then again what experinCes wOuld they grow from? I give up but yall check it out and see for yourself dont mind me.
Ey you are original Ive never seen where its a power couple travelling not like dem otha ones like they will get a girl her,girl there yada yada so great job author dont drop it im enjoying it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
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The story is ok so far if bored but I'm not at the point where I would spend coin on but it's getting better on chapter 60 so far the main characters are op as hell so be ready lol
awesome anime but hope you complete it
keep up the good work .you get better at writing after each chapter you do.i would like to see a death note in the anime it's pretty op but it would be good if only you can use it in extreme conditions.
Super anime. I gave this story a 4 star in everything but stability since it uploads daily a lot. It is cool. At times I was kind of bored? It's long. And slow. But then it will be super fast. I don't know. It has good grammar most of the times. Sometimes it fails at that though. It was good though. I liked it.
this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?
Author after reading this story for some time now. I've seen you improve your writtinf skills. I am still enjoying your story and hope you release more soon.
I really like the character development and all the character s he gathers into his faction. I wish you would update morr often though.
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F**k this is so damn stupid MC's GF is hell OP than him and spent almost every point on her but she doesn't give sh*t to him FMC is the actual powerhouse and MC is a whimp.
Enjoying so far, like how the MC is OP as hell. GF needs a little love and development as well, hope that's in the story. I do like the plot and think it will get better, good job to the author.
The start of the story is good you made her gf accompany him but it all got **** bro when you just make his gf more op than him the concept is good but the development is what can I say slightly bad, it should be better if their power is equal or he is stronger maybe a bit but you made it like the gf is more of a mc than him bye dropping this your progress for him is the slowest of all and his gf is already ahead of him many times than his progress bye bye just hope this will be successful even thoug with all that sht with his gf bye ciao sayonara
I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more .
You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-.
Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf.
The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing.
He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back.
He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ??????
OK i stop writing because i would just get worse .
The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ...
1. His gf doesn't exits.
2. She is much more thankful to him.
3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should
MotherF*cking Humanking...Sigh what a memory, I remember binged reading it for days..And Xu Que the Act Tough Saint of Exploding Heaven Factions is the man for being shameless..And I hope this novel give me some good laugh too..Well take this free 5star
After months of reading this novel it is by far one of my favorites. In love with all the characters, MC's girlfriend is my favorite though, and I like the interesting & unique storyline. Hopefully this novel will continue releasing more chapters!!
It is great read. However the girl doesn’t help the male Mc much and he is weaker than his girlfriend. I personally don’t like that but you should still give it a read and decide for yourself.
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I enjoy how the story is progressing it's interesting. Keep up the goodwork author. Keep writing chapters and don't drop and I will keep on supporting.
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