Reviews of King of German Mercenaries by Artimer - Webnovel

I really like a lot of the elements of this series but the MC's blatant racism and stupid ideas kills most of my enthusiasm for it. He has an Idea of giving black slaves to the Japanese Emperor to "Make their descendants dumber" which is nonsensical. He's always saying stuff like how he doesn't want black people in his kingdom because of how they "complain about their plave in society in America" but he's okay with Mongolians, Tibetans and Ukrainians who when put in similar situations as African americans would react Exactly the same way. Also his 'genius plan' to feed noblewomen Icecream to stop them from getting pregnant even though it's proven by studies that having milk based products IMPROVES pregnancy chances and the impact of cold foods is negligible. It's like the MC keeps picking up bigger and bigger idiot balls the more the story goes on. Which is a shame.

if this guy got a proofreader/editor this story would be so much better, but as it stands, I refuse to force myself to decipher hieroglyphs for this level of story

The translation is terrible and to continue reading we need to search for a mtl BUT the novel is a really really good kingdom building e definitly worth read

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It was a good book tell he starts to talk about chineese things and hIstroy that gets really boring, Who ever made this lagIts cant help them self without going off track and giving us a lecture like we back in school and that tends to get really annoying when he goes off track that takes maybe a chapter for him to get back on track about the novel. sorry lost my cool For a min.

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The reason why the mc is dumb because the author is dumber than the mc. The grammar is the worst kinda ruined the entire thing and the mc has no common sense and the story doesn't make sense

I liked this book quite decently in the beginning but then I went to read the second book rise of the European emperor and the MC was just racist as hell. I have nothing against what he was doing during the time period as it was normal but author said they’ll send black people to japan to lower their IQ as black people are stupid. As a black persons it’s hard to support a book with blatant racism inside of it. Author just uses the word negro casually like its nothing. I don’t mind saying slaves but it seems like the author believes in eugenics and shows his bias in this book towards hating japan. Decent book but the racism ruined it for me.

Any book that takes advantage of white supremacy conquering, enslaving, colonising and murdering of Africans, I don’t like....Even if you meant well and u are just doing dis cuz u enjoying writing(I know, I’m a writer.!) I just can’t enjoy it, knowing that my people had gone thru centuries of suffering for it.........this is not a review of what the book is actually like, just my personal opinion it’s ur choice if u wanna read...I’m just saying I personally cannot enjoy a book like that simple✌🏾

Translation leaves alot to be desired if Im being honest. However the story, the premis, and the characters are well developed and is quite gripping. I cant wait for more chapters!

Your book is good. I like it very much. Keep up the good work. God bless you......................................................................

Good story, but translation is unreadable. Needs an editor or another translator (not just MTL). ............................................

Finalmente voltou, esta de parabéns, por favor continue com a Historia porque vale muito a pena e muito boa com muito potencial para evoluir.

I like this novel very much........................!!! Just please... please.... author-sama, I really beg you. When you write a novel in English, please refrain yourself to use mandarin writing style/mandarin sentence arrangement. It gives a toll on my brain.

....................Good storyline, needs to correct on some grammar and spelling but on the whole quite a good read...................... ...............

I have been waiting a long time for the translation so thank you, I in love with the story and always excited and thinking of what could possibly happen next but somehow always get surprised in the end. The story is really enjoyable and the speed of it perfect having a good mix of both action and politics/thinking.

This book is very good, the plot and character development are very interesting along with the storytelling . Definitely worth reading if you like some history.

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Great novel one of the few that knows pace and can keeps you coming back for more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This is a pretty good book the concept and setting is what first attracted me to read it in the first place. Definitely a must read for anyone who likes history.

 I love the way the storyline is heading and falls into some of the history characters just hope that more  chapters are released soon please

The story is very interesting the research is well done, character is good. The only criticism I could offer is that the grammar could be improved, albeit, understandable enough for a reader to get the idea.

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Overall, a pretty good story so far, still needs to be updated, and the main protagonist is kind of a racist, but still a pretty good story.

This story has great potential! Even if the authors englisch could be better and he sometimes losses himself in explaining the history, al of this can be ignored because the story is freaking interesting. The HRE has an extremely complicated political landscape and the time is just at the dawn of the age of descovery so there is so much space for the story to develop and all of which are intriguing. I really wanne see how the story continues. Question to the Athor: is the novel dropped or on hiatus? If not when can we expect the next updates?

For the Spirit Stones, and thanks for putting so much effort into translating this beautiful piece of work upon which I shall bless thine holy 140 words in your holy presence