Reviews of Fate's Request: A Harry Potter FanFiction by Reevoo - Webnovel

One of the most unlikeable and dull characters I've had the displeasure of reading about

when is it going to continue , if somewhere else where

Have truly enjoyed reading this book it has been quite interesting and intriguing especially with the MC/OC having malediction while still working hard in school and on his spell work and etc. Do like how he puts in the effort and work to actually learn of how to improve himself along with also having his own potions lab as well magical creatures roaming around his forest while also having a herbology area full of different greenhouses that housed the different and sometimes exotic plants overall everything of this book has been quite interesting and intriguing especially with David having gone to Germany and getting a wand from Gregovich not sure if spelled right either way curious for what will happen next as well look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

It's a really great Harry Potter fanfiction!!! I like how MC (David) try to change a few plot (save many lives as he can) but still not change so much, so he still have an advantage.. I also like he have a relationship with Hermione (I don't hate Ron, but Hermione deserve better).. It's the first story I read where MC have a blood curse/maladictus like Greengrass House, it even relate to them in the past.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁😍😍😍👍👍

I just wanna say , don't read it cause it might fry your brains, mc is just your typical nerd who is reincarnation by goddess of death and fate. Into a cursed body whose inheritance has been stolen by ministry and is constantly following hermione like a puppy and is following the whole canon while constantly risking his life in every canon action to save hermione like he couldn't bear to see a scratch on her 🤮🤮🤮 and many similar frustating situation ex greangrass family

I loved this fanfic!!!! The story is well done and the interaction between the characters is awesome. The protagonist also show a change in his interaction and it evolves from a mental retard to a cunning person. Don't drop it!!! Its awesome

nice novel and each chapter gives satisfaction.... but hope for fast updates... writing quality is also top grade..... nice novel and each chapter gives satisfaction.... but hope for fast updates... writing quality is also top grade.....

Love your Fanfic bruh. The story kept up all night and I love it how to shipped David with Hermione and how David doesn't necessarily join the golden trio's adventures as in some novels their Mc tries to mend into the original plot and your novel is brilliant!! just brilliant!!

A fantastic fan fic, very well written. higHly recommended! I truly hope You will focus on the story and finish It. i think iT has Very high potentials

I just think you have him being to focused on hermione I mean yes I understand she was his first friend I get that but you dont have to make it were he is borderline obsessive over her have him meet other people make bonds with other people. I dont know if you did on not stopped reading after chapter 8 or so

This is a really great story. David is an interesting OC who is different from other typical self inserts because he has malediction. That really makes this worth reading. I hope you'll update again soon.

Author-sama, about how long do you estimate this fic will be by the time you are done with it? I just wanted to know because I don't like abrupt endings/short stories(which this fic doesn't seem like it will be the later seeing as there are already over 50 chapters) and this concept that you have has really piqued my interests. I'm not looking for a definitive answer or anything like that, just an estimate. sincerely; your prospective fan

mannn...can u addd another women as well......you know daphne would do... ..

Truly said this is on of the baddest HP fics i have read. Not because of grammar or idea but because how it is writin. You jump from one scene to the next and leave so much information out. The characters just dont make sense and only those wo aktualy know Harry Potter will understand the story. Moreover all these scenes could have been chapters it self!

My dude, what's with all the stupid Ron Bashing? Ron wasn't all that bad in the books at all. You've even said that you've read the books so you'll know that Hermione in from the books is also quite an annoying person as well.......

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Hey author you don't have to write a ***** scene if you don't want to. This just feel weird and out of place in this chapter and story. Other than that great story.

i like this story, but the MC is stupid to follow canon so he can save some muggleborns in 7 th year by putting up some tents. he got permission from death to change wat ever he likes. he read the books and watched the movies so he knows wats coming and wen, he neglects the rat, sirius, harrys abuse at home and even the horcruxes . he go's even so far to put a horcrux bac so lupin get's fired. so he is a idiot for doing nothing with wat he knows of canon

Not that great of a story for me personally. The pacing of the book is awful... I am lucky I know the general story of Harry Potter or I would be fcked. It skips out on tons of information, with the descriptions not that great either. I mean I think his whole first year at school or maybe half the school year? It was done in two chapters... (example) Gl to the author, it's just I like reading stories where I can paint the picture of what happens in my head if that makes sense?

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This is so good. One of the best story. I hate umbridge more than voldemort. Hope she gets dementor kiss at the end of fifth year. Also can't wait to read more.

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This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever read.It is surprisingly well written with little to no grammatical mistakes and a good plotline. I didn't like the character development very much since I don't think Hermione would ever be that forward in her romance right after the second year. It isn't portrayed like that in the book.

Hello Rivo. I am your fan and would like to know about the fate of your works. Will there be more sequels coming out soon, or can we not expect them in the near future?

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Really like this fic. You have a knack for telling a story that's interesting but not too OP. Hope you update more often, good luck with your work.

I was skeptical about the other reviews saying this was a good fan fic. I read with intentions of things being normal and over used (ideas and such) BUT I WAS WRONG. I kept going and going and managed to catch up to the latest chapter! 🥺 now I’m crying for more

I finnally coughed up with the fresh updates (ch45) so i decided to write a review... This fanfic up to this point is a story about "what would you do if you were a part of this story". Almost no alteration to the main plot. MC keeps to the side lines and lives his own life fulfilling his mission given to him in chap 1. Up to chap 45 MC focuses on himself and his "hidden" influence worldwide. The fanfic gives the vibe that thing will have a drastic turn from the main plot as it will focus on directly saving people. My one fear is that this fanfic will be still written like it was up this point and we will have only small updates about things that are noc in canon and most of the chapters will still be about MC being part of the main plot. I can have my opinion, likes or dislikes and i feel that i could not fully express myself in writing. But main point i want to say is that still this is a good story different from other i read. MC living with original plot is a first for me i can frown upon it because I'm used to other fanfic heavy altering the story but still i like it and i wish to see it continue.