Reviews of Alma by FattyBai - Webnovel

Hey, how are you all doing? If you stumbled onto my novel out of pure chance and gave it a shot, I want to let you know I appreciate the gesture. Whether or not you liked it, I'm still glad that you gave it a chance. My novel's a bit unorthodox by Webnovel standards, so it doesn't pull in the largest crowds, per se. But I'm still having loads of fun writing it, nevertheless. For those of you who did find it interesting, please stick around and watch the story unfold with me. At the very least, I promise it'll be a unique tale, haha. Hope to keep seeing my silent lurkers read on for many days to come; love you, shy boys!

I don't understand why it is so difficult for authors to write normal synopsis. First of all, the name of the story didn't clarify anything concerning the story, then there is the synopsis that does the same, the author spends more words complaining and explaining his writing style and character design than explaining anything meaningful. Synopsis is meant to be a short description of the content of the book, not a prologue.

Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.

well the story is about a guy who wants the life ON a beach only to find out that life IS a beach (no pun intended) with high tides and low tides. based on what I've read so far, he wants a slow life, goes along with the flow, has the tendency to escape from problems (a relatable problem) and hesitates to make decisions. This gives him a lot of potential to grow and he didn't disappoint. but here's my problem, we rarely see things from other perspectives, so we can't really get a feel of how much he's grown compared to others. so I'll rate it a four out of five for now.

You sound a bit too aggressive in the synopsis. tbh

This type story is not worth reading because the mc is weak will and I hate those with that character the most because those characters fear the strong and bully the weak and they tend to betray their friends when put under pressure

It's a great series and it's gets you hooked up with its interesting background stories. And I am currently confused about like who is "He" referring and also relation between "He" and Lu'um

I just spent 20€ on 1000 coins to finish it in 2 days. It's a masterpiece, nothing like you've ever read on this site. I absolutely love the character development, how regardless of the novel being already at 199 chapters (as i'm writing this review right now), you can perceive that Reed has still a looong way of psychological development ahead. Only sour note is the update stability, but as the author said, it's impossible to write actually good chapters in just a day. Keep it up Fatty 💪

Honestly im just preemptively giving the novel 5 stars because of how nice the authors note in the synopsis was. By nice I mean that the content was endearing and well written which has given me expectations towards the story written by the author.

Okay I have read just the few chapters and let me say it is not dissapointing and it is actually Great. Contrary to what you would expect, it isnt one of those less detailed and very slow paced type of novels. Although it is slow paced its not "THAT" slow and you can actually feel the story progress as long as you give it time, it also contains more detail compared to the regular stories that have a fast pace which helps the story progress smoothly. So this is just my first part of review and I will change it later. See you guys again

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This is a top tier story if I've ever read one. This novel might have some misspellings here and ther but its a good story. And I absolutely love the beginning of each chapter where MC rants to us readers, its a nice touxh. So far so good.

I haven’t even read the book but I am giving this book a five star rating from that synopsis alone mmm it was incredible and will definitely read it.

why this novel hasn't taken off is a complete mystery to me, the character design is amazing (no unidimentional personalities), the world background is intricate, the story is full of twists (some times you can get lost, but it's a good thing bc it puts you in the same shoes as the MC) and when you take the pieces that are scrambled in the story and starts to unravel is amazing...

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I don't even know where to begin... I only read a few chapters, but already I love it. I really like how the mc has the possibility to evolve, to gain in maturity, his way of conceiving what surrounds him. the best part ils how IT Makes me laugh, it's funny how everything seems to impose itself on him. thank you for creating this wonder.

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Cool, seems like it could be awesome. I look forward to further progress. Cant wait for more details and excitment to boot. Thank you and have a good day.

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Ok I reviewed already for my pre evaluation but after reading only the first chapter I'm ABSOLUTELY HOOKED this novel is interesting well written and has a mysterious quality all it's own it's so flippin good I had to stop by and rate again I love the way this author writes hes not afraid to cuss or get into gritty detail and all of his sentences are well flowing and eloquently spoken I have read 1 chap and I love this book😂😂

To be honest the premise of the novel sounds amazing and if the author would like to a similar sounding novel would be supreme magus bc it's got an mc with a dark past too. I like this novel with a real human being as mc I'm excited to see where this goes. Pre-novel report end😊

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All in all a very exciting story, my impatience for more chapters is what gave the novel a less than 5 star rating haha.

Nice start author even thou it is a slow progress but the main thing is the progression of the book and am seeing that here Well done Like they say 'slow and steady win the race'.

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This is the most confusing and mindbreaking story I have ever read. I can say that the main character is well written, but there is not a lot of context to anything, where is this, what is happening, who are all these people, it's kind of all over the place and there is so much that is crammed into the story arcs, the writing will sometime make sense, but often it will tear away the semblance of understanding the reader is trying to find, I think that this is an interesting story, but it should be grounded in something, with a curse upon the land, characters that just appear without any description, it feels like there is no context built for the reader to connect to the story, and therefore one cannot imagine the world in a sense. Other than that I find it kinda fascinating, but I'm unable to read more than a few chapters at the time as it never stop giving me headaches😓. I'm .still going to continue reading, but I hope at some place in the future it will make more sense, I'm not looking for a overpowered mc or a happy ending or anything, I just want to understand all the small details that is happening in the story and that it will explain what is happening. I want a story with a different mc(which it has) i want a understandable world building (which haven't appeared yet), some sort of understanding of the interactions in the storytelling process. I just hope that I can watch the story grow into a whole piece instead of short cutting into different pieces of the story without producing a suitable decisive theme for a arc, so good luck to the author, hope this can explain what I feel about the novel and hopefully I will understand it in the future and maybe give a better rating. All g in the hood and I'll try my best. So this story better be worth the time I'm going to spend on it ❤🤔 see yall later🎉

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I’m really disappointed, the author stressed so much how his protagonist would start from the bottom and would have to strive to improve in both and personality, but he is still the same the same OP MC. Even if he starts from the bottom he doesn’t struggle at all, he is the most talented of all that given time will easily surpass everyone else. The author says that he is weak-willed and indecisive, but he never acts like that, even if force by the circumstances still he never acts indecisive, he immediately works his ass of. The author says one thing, but the MC’s actions say another one. I’ve read only the first part before quitting because it was so disappointing, the author rants about something and then does the same thing. The MC never fails, easily obtain everything and his psychological development is poorly executed, he changes from weak-willed to iron-willed way to easily. And even if there is some whining in his thoughts, it is never reflected in his actions.

It is an amazing work by the author and i really enjoy the book..it is one of best one that i had ever read...i want to appreciate the author for the work