Reviews of Alma by FattyBai - Webnovel

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Used the word spooky in the first chapter not gona lie to you, I’ve only read like 6-7 paragraphs so far but... it’s got spooky in the first chapter! Instant ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ review in my book. In all honesty I’ll post a “legit” review once I’ve read a minimum of 50 chapters. Author gets free happy review. 😈

Lmao I just love how you put a very vivid warning in the book description couldent have been more clear😂😂😂very heated but I like the honesty.

I am giving you a 5 star review just because of your message after the little hook you throw out on the main page. I like ur attitude its awesome.

There are very few novels that can make me say this but this novel is absolutely one of them. It is a MASTERPIECE. That's it, that is all I have to say. Actually this is the novel that compelled me to write up a the story for my novel. 10/10 - 100% of the time. No doubt about it.

Just gonna give it a 5 star review because I’m confident I don’t have to remove this post to give it a lower rating. From the summary alone, this novel is definitely going to be a good novel, I can just tell

Loving the novel so far. The world building is good and fresh the interiactions between characters and devolopment is funny somtimes and intersting not too fast nor too slow. Waiting for more chapters.

Well, it is a good story for an use isekai I suppose but there doesn’t seem to be much of what has been promised. Quite the contrary the MC is cliche in every way of plot armor possible so far. The only thing might be that the MC doesn’t like the role he is pressured into but this is nothing special and has been done before. Another aspect is that the world building seems rather strange to me. You have kingdoms, cultivators and high technology like tablets and phones. This seems very strange and is likely to create contradictions down the line. Well I’ll be not giving up hope just yet to find what the author promised but I doubt I will find it here.

I like what you have written so far but even more is that you write for yourself, for the story and a personal conviction which turn into an original story. Gj keep it up. I am not giving you a full score because of some issues which started from personal opinion but i don't want to impose as you made yourself crystal clear about it in the description.

The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.

Love the novel so far but the release rate is so low sometimes it take over a week to get 1 chapter but the story is great as well as the writing so far. Hope for increase in release rate.

The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.

Absolutely worth and pleasing to read with funny interaction, well thought world building and power level, the only cons is the fact there is a kind of premeditates fate/destiny with chosen one etc, but it's personal preference and too soon to prononce myself on it and there isn't yet enough informations.

The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.

Pretty good story, good writing. But the mc makes little sense in his decisions and does not seem to mind being treated as a mushroom and is way to forgiving for being assaulted for no good reason and ignored and being tortured. It is to annoying and I find it more unbelievable then the magic, unless he is a serious masochist which has not been indicated. I am dropping, I wish the author well he seems talented.

Great book with an intriguing plot and excellent grammar and spelling.Just needs more chapters lol. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller

The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.

This is good. This is good, and that it.

While the synopsis sounded like it would lead to an interesting Claok and dagger style story, instead we get an Isekai. The quality of the writing form a techincal standpoint is better than most stories I have read here on Webnovel, but there are more than a handfull of tiems where the author suddenly switches narrating perspectives, has a few words repeated by what I assume to eb mistake or some tense mistakes. As for the story itself, whiel it starts of interestingly enough, it soon devolves into the same cliche ridden thing as most Isekai stories. Up to this point most characters felt very much one dimensional or proped up by tropes and cliches. The story developed at a decent, but rather slow pace, while the world as shown so far has little to nothign special to it compared to many other Isekais, but has neither anythign obviously wrong with it. All in all I got to say if you want a different flavor of the standard Isekai, this story is better than at elast 80% of what Webnovel has to offer you. If not, it probably isn't the story for you.

I don't really know what to do when I review stuff, so I'll be brief. This story is good. Really good. The grammar is top-notch and, from what I could tell, lacked any major grammar mistakes. If you told me that the author had a professional editor and cleaner, I'd believe you. The characters are interesting and the dialogue flows well. Nothing seems broken up, overall. Fascinating world from a great author. It definitely helps that you can tell English is a primary language for this author, and that they don't overwork themselves. I know how valuable inspiration can be, and when people write without any inspiration at all, it shows. Top notch novel, absolutely added to my collections for later.

Hi! I should say the way you write is so smooth and decent, it gave me chills when I read how you describe the background of the world's. And the story build is really interesting. I got sucked in from when the will of world is introduced and when Reed goes in and you know what xD *spoiler* lol. This story is a gem for fantasy lovers and motivates other fantasy writers that are on here. Thank you for such a crafted story. And good luck for the future.

Not exactly the genre I would usually go for, nonetheless, the plot doesn't disappoint. The author's writing skills are up to the level until this point!

I genuinely think that your novel is interesting. Although personally I found it too heavy, but it was also light at the same time. I found some words are philosophical so it's really meaningful. The story development is also pace very well. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!

The start of the novel is nice, every one can relate to a few things written, but it's an unexpected story. I will appreciate author for the long chapters, it will give the reader satisfaction even if you would update one chapter a day. Keep up the good work.

For those who like books based on fantasy or supernatural realm, they definitely should give this a read! I like the detailed elaborations of the worldly background and our main character. The grammar is good as well. Haven't made it really far because of busy routine but will definitely continue it. All in all, good job author ♥️

Heya, it's a good read, the story is good, the characters are good, and the English is good too (at least better then mine) a missing word here and there but nothing to fuss over. I'm glad I picked it up and spend my time reading it. I hope there will be some plot twist down the line though, as it kind of feels that the hints for the plot aren't very subtle. But that might just be my taste! Doesn't make the story worse. All in all, I recommend!