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RikkaLiao
I'm still a beginner when it comes to writing but I'll do my best to make a Murder-Mystery Romance that is set in Taiwan. You might notice a lot of grammatical errors but I will do my best to edit it because everything posted is mostly 1st drafts.
I want to point, however, that I dislike abusive romance, which was why I refrain myself doing so. This is why I don't know why some people pointed out an 'abusive' character in my story. Just hoping that they don't assume this solely just because of the vengeance theme but actually reading the story.
Thank you for checking this book out and happy reading!
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AxlSLL
Your story, author, although i must say that starts bland and a little boring, begins to steadily to sum every important part to create something more promising and complex.
You did a good job with the characters. They are rounded and feel human. The spot on is the relationship dinamycs between the main characters. Good, abusive characters are some of the hardest to write. You've done a good job with this.
You definitely need to work with your grammar. It can make the story exhausting to read. If you aren't a native Engish Speaker you can use many grammar correctors out there on the Internet.
Good job. Keep improving it.
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Xenovraise
FEMALE LEAD IS INTERESTING!
Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story.
I'm quite the writer of female MCs myself so I find this great and can recommend it to everyone that it has good story, creativity wise, no grammar lapses and word construction is good.
Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :)
The plot is fast paced and the dialogue is entertaining to read and indulge.
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ggone_
I’d first like to point out how stunning the cover is! I feel like it really fits the story and, of course, the title. Although this books seems to have a somewhat abusive-ish relationship, it’s tolerable unlike a specific novel I’ve read (*cough* Back Then I Adored You *cough*). I think it’s quite early to say anything, but so far I’ve liked what I’ve read so far. :)
Kudos to the author for their hard work and great book!
Writing Quality: This, no doubt, deserved 5 stars! The scenes and characters all flowed so well that reading up until the latest could be finished in a blink of an eye. The author’s grammar also deserves 5 stars as well! I’m not quite sure if this is the author’s first time posting a book, but if it is then it’s definitely great for a first book.
Stability of Updates: I’m not sure how frequent the author updates.
Story Development: The story only has 4 chapters so far, but the plot has been promising so far. The synopsis gives a bit of an idea of what the story is, but there are still parts in the story that still remains a mystery. Overall, this book is a must-have in your library!
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anon88
This is a review of the first chapter. The female lead has just married to an abusive man who has a grudge against her father. To protect her father and herself, she has agreed to not speak with her father ever again. The plot is fast paced and well written. The dialogue provided a contrast between the characters and is well done!
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