Reviews of -end- by ggone_ - Webnovel

Hello! You have a very hooking synopsis. I don’t think I will ever want to get trapped with anyone who believe in such a superstition but this is the fact that will make people want to check the book. I don’t know whether will I put her ‘incident’ as a good karma for giving her seat for the elders or is it a bad karma. But I will take it as a good karma since it’s the way she bumped into the male lead. XD I think your emoji is making the story looks pretty imaginable if it’s turned into a Korean drama. Though if this book possibly published in the future (amen for that), your editor would definitely want you to remove that. Haha~ Areum better never judge people from the way they looked when they were kids because puberty somewhat has an ‘ugly duckling turned into swan’ effect. Kinda funny to see him being the one who told her to take the ‘responsibility’ and not the other way around. I think he’s just trying to engage an interaction with her. XD I really like the part where you explain how the school implement what they want for the children through their architecture. It really adds the depth to the world you’re building and I agree with their method, though you won’t want to get late that way. XD I’ve read up to chapter 11 and I think I’m still yet to reach the main ordeal of the story and I can’t wait to see how the story is going to unfold. I think you’re doing a great job fleshing out the characters. Thank you for your hard work writing this, Author. =)

First of all: YOU MADE ME LAUGH OUT LOUD IN CLASS HAHAHAHA. Well, on to the actual review. I like the way you describe your world, your protagonists' dynamic, and the spin you put in order to make the world as we know it... More interesting, I guess? The jabs on how some authors describe the characters (He was like all those descriptions coming to life...) is somehow funny. Though the emotes, while cute, kind of distract me. So, that's half a star deduction, but some seems to find the emotes cute, and it can be an unique charn, so you do you.

I can't write on the stability of updates since it seems she doesn't have a schedule, so it's a 5. Your writing is fine. Not the best, but not too shabby either. I would definitely like if you include a description of the setting as it just really adds to the picture and sometimes only midway do I know where they're at. This makes it hard for me to read since I have to actually connect the puzzle pieces together. Second, the emoticons. They're cute and I like them. They work best when you add them to thoughts. I would recommend you hold back on them though because sometimes you use it to replace actions. I think if you really wrote the actions, it would read much better. Third, looks. It's hard for me to visualize the characters in my head because you don't give them any physical features. You only describe the transfer student on the bus, and it would be nice to even know one adjective of, for example, Kang Soomin. Also, please try giving like even a quick 1 sentence intro to an important character. I had no idea who Kang Soomin was and I had to think for a few seconds to use context clues that Kang Soomin was MC's BFF. It really helps shape the character and let the reader know who they are. The story is a pretty interesting read, but it's not for me. I know that lots of readers would like this book though. It's really promising! Good luck :)

I'm gonna be frank. I was distracted by the mini emojis of the novel. I did not focus on reading and just focused on thinking what emoji it is. I hope you remove those if you like but so far, the story is good.