Amazing story line...great concept, acient and precise....I love it and I look forward to more interesting stories from the author. Great work guys.lllllllllooooooooovvvvvvvveeeee iiiiijtttt....all the way from Nigeria
Normally, I would not read this type of book but this one is nice. If you are looking to escape another world of female leading, this is one of the best.
Such a wondrous story. I'm already a fan. Thank you for starting to write and for showing the world you've got it in you. I know that you have greater skills than you are showing, hone it and you'll see.
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Overall, its a fine piece of work (in terms of plot and such). But the quality of writing made it hard to read and difficult to enjoy. Try getting a proofreader maybe?
exciting story. We got a system, fantasy, and a female mc with adventure. As we begin the journey with the priestess, we learn a lot about a totally different culture. The author's creativity is brilliant and the world-building is cool. It's a given that this novel should get more attention.
It is still too early for a proper review. The novel has a refreshing plot that shows a married couple who adopt a child. Let us see how it goes. Good luck Author-nim.
This review is to support the cat, and the story bears its own space. I hope that the writer have planned to give this story some length, grammar and punctuation things are better than my own works, cough.
Its a nice a ory.the cover is epic.I may be unable to fully read It now but I've add to my library to read i n future. It is necessary to read lots of stories especially of one seeks inspiration
Truly a novel that doesn't disappoint!π The grammar is alright and simply requires correction at some parts. Other than that, keep up with the good work!
I must say it's a different genre and totally unique plotline. It's like reading a novella in Catholicism time. A well written story depicting a whole new thing to read. I recommend this if you want something really interesting and light other than romance.
Hello! Ive read about 5 chapters. Sorry, I will change the review later but so far im hooked. I like the concept of gods and goddesses, how it the church's and them fought in a war. Im just thinking if the God of War has someting to do for all of that to happen. I have many questionsa nd im loving reading this. Hoping for more!
I'll give a proper review later after I read it. Thanks btw.
I'm really a newbie in terms on this genre, Fantasy. Overall, I think your storyline is interesting. I could feel the emotion from the characters and I think you did a great job in providing the details.
I'm looking forward to more of her adventures. Thanks for introducing this story to me.
writing quality is good. i want to know more about the characters and more of world background. as of now, everything looks good and promising. keep it up and keep writing ;) ill do another review after 30 chapters.
Interesting concept and story line. The FL is still young and there are a lot of mysteries that need solving but the pace of the story is still ok.
I was sad on how the FL lost her master though and I'm looking forward to how she would react about it when she gain her memories.
Good luck author-san!
Iβd like to point out first how much I like the cover! Based on what Iβve read so far, it fits the story perfectly. Itβs quite early to say much about this book but this story has a lot of potential. Iβm looking forward to Raven remembering her memories and how she would hold up in her new environment. There were a few grammar mistakes but it doesnβt greatly affect the story. Kudos to the author for the good work! Hoping for more chapters to come~
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