Nice story, and nice characters, I am a little bit confused as I didn't understand some stuff you mentioned but I guess it will all be cleared up eventually.😍😍 keep it up, author.
And have fun while writing❤❤
I found this story from a discord recommendation and I think it’s ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!! The only thing that’s killing me is probably the grammar and some questionable choice of words... I’m not trying to be rude or anything- But, would you like me to help you edit or at least proof read the story? I know it’s a lot to ask.. especially when it’s just a random stranger.......... ok. In all honesty I just want to help you edit. I’m on lockdown and I have nothing to do. Not trying to imply that I’ll be irregular and stop helping after the lockdown is lifted. I’m a dedicated editor!!
Laseal_Chan