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Gold_Paper_Crane
This novel is funny and has a great storyline. I like how the author also incorporate sound effects, like when the wind blows, or when the horse hoofed.
I especially liked the interaction between FL and Grandpa. So hilarious!
Thank you for introducing me to this novel!
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Delliiriium
I think the idea for the story so far is pretty good! It's a shame I'm not a big fan of the style of the MC and humour. I think her development is kind of weird, from being unknowing of anything, to suddenly making a breakthrough like two paragraphs later... The story is pretty well written and I can tell you've put in thought when it comes to the plot!
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SilentMild
Happy to find another WordSmith :D Keep on writing, and refining your craft!
Keep up the good work! Hoping you could check out mine too
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ElleJaye
First of all, i love the title. XD
I have my own evil King as well. Can't help it.
Love what you've done so far. Writing and plot progresses very well. Character bg's are written well. Keep it up author! :D
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LiLhyz
Wow! I'm giving you all 5 primarily because of how interesting the story is. The two are bound to get to know and support each other... Good job on the cover, that made me jealous you can do it on your own. Love how well written each chapter was and how humor is incorporated. I look forward to the story development. Good luck to you, author!
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Axicia_
This story is pretty fun, non-submissive FEMC is and will always be my favorite trope. There are slight mistakes but it is clear that the author puts a lot of thought into her work, and the comparisons helps to visualize the scene even more.
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AnjGee
Wow, it’s my first time to read a cultivation/martial arts novel since I usually read romance but I was surprised I enjoyed it. This is well written as the author’s style of narration were so flawless with so many flavours my mind doesn’t get bored while reading it. I like the Mc she’s a fighter but w/ flaws which makes her more relatable... I had a strong feeling she’s a caterpillar that will turn into a butterfly as the story progress, anyway, will surely read further. The empreror cracked me up honestly, I find him funny. Lol. Two thumbs up and recommended for those readers who like entertaining cultivation related story. The world background is nice as well as the exchanges of dialogues are well written :) more power author!
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dumdum007
For those who like to read cultivation stories, they should definitely gube this book a read. The start is good and so is the story progress. There are no errors at all. The world background is described pretty well that one can assume it before them.♥️
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KrazyWriter
Believe me, the story looks very promising, I'll continue to read it and see what happens, since I've only read the beginning, I won't say anything about the story itself, but I'll say that your writing is good and you describe the situations and places well.
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RikkaLiao
Hello!
Your story has an interesting opening. Though he admits that everyone is calling him the evil emperor, I don’t think their exchange give me that impression so I truly understand why Ling Ai is surprised by this. I truly understand why grandpa keeps a secret about his true identity. When you’re a grand master, everyone would come to become your apprentice, including people who want to test out their power for fame. I hope Ling Ai will inherit his techniques and become a great martial artist someday. =)
I’m starting to see the main idea of the story in chapter 3. Ling Ai’s life is filled with the love from her grandfather while the emperor has everything but feel so empty. I think with his super vision, he already sees something he’s seeking in Ling Ai which is why he seems to be interested in her. But oh dear God... I feel so satisfied when he finds out that he’s switching body with Ling Ai. I guess karma has started its punishment for the bad deeds he (possibly?) had done. I can just wish him luck living with *ehem* swollen chest.
I think your story has an interesting premise and I would like to continue this later (I’m reading up to chap 5). XD Your descriptions are easy to be imagined. The only thing you might want to consider revise in case you’re editing the story maybe something like: “Wait! Please wait!” he sighed, “Let’s not rush things, okay?” try to make the onomatopoiea a sentence. Then you’re good to go. =)
Also, may I point on how beautiful the cover art is? You have a very nice drawing! =)
Thank you for your hard work on this book, Author!
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PoeticPenguin
This is a hidden gem. The author writes with serious care and the story itself is quite unreal (as in the depth and plot.) I love the main character, and the author isn’t unrealistic and show that the MC is not perfect at times. Writing quality is top-notch.
Most female cultivation novels I’ve read aren’t really good. They focus too much on cultivation and has no story line, only the occasional cliche villain. I’m not kidding when I say this is the first female cultivation novel I actually liked.
For originality, I would give it 5 stars. Though from reading the title... taming the emperor/ceo is quite cliche, this story doesn’t go through a typical route and has its own little quirks and twists. (emperor has no interest but small curiosity at first.)
I believe the author made his/her own cover? To be fairly honest, the author has pretty nice skills! One thing to note though is that most people might not necessarily be attracted to the cover. But I like it~ huehue
I rarely give out 5 stars, but this book deserves it. I might be giving another review when I reach chapter 29 though lol just so I can do a nice “spoiler” review.
Ten out of ten, I would expect this book to be in top 100. I hope others will find this hidden gem~~~ 😊
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KENTARO12100
Well, nothing like a good novel of cultivation, man good plot with that two protagonists, pls keep going I will be reading for that I add to my library ;)
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ShinSungmi
As much as I've read, I must say that the author did a good job in writing this novel! The grammar could go through some proofreading at parts, but other than that, it is well-written.
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ILLYAchan
This story definitely caught my Interest. I'm still on chapter seven and will continue to read this novel.
The writing quality is good and I have smooth reading experience throughout the chapters.
The male lead is quite different from others. I thought he would be a cold person but it turns out that he's a talkative person whose insulting every lowly beings in his eyes and a hot headed person in general. It went well with female lead. Also, it's a fantasy novel which is the genre I mostly wanted to read.
In over all, this is good story! Will keep in my library :)
Good luck author!
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NEidarous
Not the type of books I would usually enjoy but to be fair this one is good. The characters development are in good speed, the world background is good as well. The idea of female lead taming the male lead might be cliche but it's not in this story. Highly recommend. Great job author.
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Brandongould1994
As a writer who enjoys Eastern fanstey types of things, this book is a my good book so far. I have enjoyed it and I do think that there should be a bit more world building in this world, probably more detailed backstory and detail on characters but this is my opinion. All in all it is a book that I would recommend to anyone
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ggone_
This isn’t a genre that I would frequently read but it’s something that I would read from time to time. Just by reading the title and the synopsis, I already knew that I would enjoy reading this novel. Even the interactions between the characters were one of the things I enjoyed as well!
Kudos to the author for the great novel and hard work!
Writing Quality: As far as I’ve read, I don’t think I saw anything that needed to be corrected. The author’s grammar and way of explaining is definitely well-written. The descriptions provided by the author were sufficient in visualizing the characters and the scenarios occurring.
Stability of Updates: This has to be one of the good points. The author keeps a stable update schedule!
Story Development: I think I’d consider it rather early to say anything about the plot development. I definitely didn’t expect the plot twist in the early parts of the story! Based on what I’ve read so far, I believe this would be enjoyable and wouldn’t disappoint current and future readers! :)
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Prettynice22
Great story about a strong woman and it's nice to see a fearless woman. Keep up the good work author. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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TheLazyRabbit
Read the story. It was a good start and I think it's intriguing. Hope you continue writing daily and maybe. this will become premium. Your MC is interesting.
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May1st
A well written and interesting story, it makes me crave for more and more.
The story is well thought of, getting to a point, i was pleased with how the author explained the grandpa's thought about ling faults. It shows how much effort the author put in his story. 'I was kinda like, why is it her fault and then let out a sigh of relief after reading further'.
Nice grammar and a stable update, i will recommend that my fellow readers check this out.
Good luck author, God bless.
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Daoist_Food
This novel is completely captivating. I loved the dialogues between characters. Extra points for the nice cover and stable updates. Good luck!
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Peachwoodgirl6
Dear author I really liked your story. This first time I am reading eastern fantasy and it is better than I expected it to be . Your story is interesting. Keep up the good work.
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_Sha
I know its early review and let me clear it too that I am not reading or reviewing this story as a critique. Beyond the fact that I am myself a writer, I am truly a greedy reader. The opening of the novel is interesting and very carefully designed. The writer picked exquisite way to explore his writing style and I admit its interesting too. The description and imagination are both kept in fascinating way that it immediately triggered my greed to continue to read along.
Excellent effort.
Goodluck author.
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ThirdSanity
The Story is really great! For the heroine to be on the level of Zero to Hero progress and the Most Evil Emperor to Hero to Zero is really funny. Expecting great things in this one! Looking forward on every updates! All in all, Great job! Much recommended.
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Alexander_Moe
The is quite interesting, it's well written and well thought out. And as far as I can tell the updates are super stable. The story progression is fair and the world background is vibrant. Normally, I don't read cultivation novels and that sort of things, but this novel seems unique thus far.
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FishStix
I have read so many different novels about female cultivators taming extremely powerful male martial artists and their journey starts there. But this book is rather interesting in it's own way because 1st the cultivation is not the usual one and you will find it good if you give it a try. i wont spoil anything but i can tell you that once you start reading, you will start binging!
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Xenovraise
Hi there! To all my readers and supporters, thank you for being here and at least done reading the chapters 10 or 11. I wanna interact with you guys.
Ling Ai at 19 years of age seem to be just starting her journey in Martial arts with a body not hers. But within just one month, what cultivation will she reach?
Will it be the cub? The bear? Or the dragon?
With her Master Zhuanxu YeBai, 20 years of age.
What heights do you think Ling Ai will reach in the future.
Will she complete her mission? But what is the plan of her Master after she completed the mission?
Add this to your library and find out as you binge read it all along until Ling Ai reaches her goal and completes her mission.
Let's talk about it. ;)
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