Reviews of Rebirth and Second Chances by F_Riley - Webnovel

It’s an amazing book. The plot is very in depth and fleshed out, and there isn’t any plot holes I can see so far. The system of magic and in general is different than a lot of the others on this site, and it’s very well planned out. The characters are very real, and it isn’t just your typical villager A and B except for the main characters. This also draws on a lot of myths from our world, and masterfully weaves them into the story, bringing creatures from imagination and fairytale to life in this book. While it isn’t as ridiculous as the people who were releasing 2-3 chapters a day, the book’s update schedule is also quite good, especially to books that only update once every week or two.

My new favorite. It's a fantastic foray into dreamy Celtic imagery. I love the world building and the lore that was expounded on. It's not perfect sure. But for a first time novel, it was pretty great. I loved it. 🥰

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great novel, there is no awkwardness when the pov/story change and every paragraph. story developments, fast paced for me cause the plot thicken bellow 100chap, the cliff hanger made by telling other story first before continue suit my taste, telling other character story makes the story development grow. character design is a bit confusing for me since i dont know some of the race look like, many author didnt describe much assuming reader know. its too early to judge how the mc or character in the novel act since i didnt finish 100chap yet. skip updating stab world background i feel its too big to play than needed actually except the mc will jump around to another realm or world but it could be describe later as a surprise. for me what this novel worth reading is author writing style and have different system. and i like kingdom building.

This is great! Why isn’t it in the top 50 WebNovels List? I recommend this to everyone. 5/5. Have my power stones.

This little wonder deserves more visibility. Little things to expect for this book: - Originality - Open minded - Realistic in its logic, in the conception of the characters. - Myth integrate And more. I advise the person too accustomed to too unreal situations to open their mind to read this nonetheless.

Your book is very good so far interesting however Sidhe race it’s one of the most chaotic species out there they are not good the more evil however it differs they’re all about themselves they are selfish they only care of them selves on only about themselves and do we do anything to get the upper hand and power that’s what they are I just want to state that now so you may have to fix that

Eu tenho uma pergunta. Ele usa máscara para sempre? detesto quando o personagem usa máscara para esconder sua beleza... apenas quando necessário, em missões por exemplo. Então, ele vai usar máscara para sempre? estou no capítulo 60.

Please don't drop this book. It's amazing!!! If you're worried about readers, there are a lot more on pirating websites.

The world building, the characters, the story and everythIng else is to die for. 100% recommended. Never have a read a story that Encompases the Sidhe in such a detailed way. A literal Gem

Superbe histoire originale qui ma fait voyager tout en revisitant la mythologie d'une très adroit façon ^^ _____________________________________

I'm unsure how to rate this novel. On one hand it's a great novel that is well written and fun to read. On the other hand however, this novel gets bogged down by one of the big sins of writing: too much exposition. This novel starts out great, with a great first chapter. After that however, you get 6-7 chapters of mostly exposition -- which is very much on the heavy side already. When that's through, you think to yourself: finally, now things will really get started! But even after things get started, the exposition keeps coming. Pretty much every little things needs a paragraph of exposition. See a character -> several paragraphs of exposition about said character. Want to walk through a portal -> a paragraph of exposition about what it feels like walking through a portal. See a weapon -> a paragraph of exposition about said type of weapon. It's just too much. To be fair though, besides the 'sin of exposition', I have fairly few complaints about this novel. It's written well, with character that aren't just dumb NPCs and a world and story that are fairly interesting. Sure, there is things I could nit pick about, but it's honestly not worth the effort. When this novel isn't bogged down in its excessive exposition, it's a great read. So my one tip to the author would be: think/talk about things less, but make characters do more. If it were up to me, I'd cut that entire "friend" character out of the novel -- he is the main device for most of the exposition.

I think it is good in terms of story and plot but for me, I like to keep things simple. Not too simple, but simple. Although I am going to give it a pretty good review because I can see how much better it is than regular web novels, in the end, it is not for me. There is too much talking and the plot kind of makes me confused. I know people will disagree with me on some a lot of things but, well, I have my own opinion. The entire story is also too slow for me. I mean, it has a lot of detail, and I am fine with that but overall, I don't really see myself enjoying this too much. I have always liked web novels where the main character has some kind of goal but this main characters goals and ideas are all over the place and I am not able to piece them together. I also feel like he is dumb and naive and that just makes me less interested in this novel. Also, the constant thought of trying to figure out what his sexuality is is driving me mad. Again, I might not have the same opinion as some other people and a lot of people are going to be like 'What the heck is this guy talking about' or 'I thought it was good and did not see the things this guy is claiming' but in the end, this is all my opinion and my preference. Basically, this story is not my cup of tea. In conclusion, I will still say that it is a good story and if you want to read it go for it.

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I like the world background as for the character not so much. A MC doesn't have to be dumb to not be OP. Hopefully he becomes smarter as things go on but he seems to be incredibly naive. The writing quality is great, very few grammatical or spelling errors. Also, on the point of people not liking op MCs as stated by others most people like op mcs. Good luck on the story

The book is great and all there should be a kingdom building tag. There's miniscule action and a whole lot of planning, conspiracy, talking and bouquets. It's beaming tidious to read without action or magic The levels a thoroughly explained but confusing as hell. The mc is well average, questions almost everything, he's plain not exciting at all. The book is full of potential like crazy. But the long discussion makes it boring to read. All in all its a good read if you have the patience[img=recommend]

i love your novel, because of the quality of your world building, the characters, but mostly because of the magical race of sidhe, that i always loved. i whish to ask if you know other story about sidhe ??? pls

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The best part here is that the characters are three dimensional, Giving the characters an emotional background helps the reader to feel for them. One more positive is that, this story is a unique one....not a rip-off or an inspired story. I like how the author did good research on the backgrounds of mythology and also makes the reader feel that the author put his 100 percent. Let's come to negatives My first concern is on how the first 50 chapters have a lot of info dumps which makes some people feel like you are reading an encyclopedia of the world. You are supposed to slowly introduce the unknown things about the world to the reader, but the author puts everything he wants us to know at the starting which makes us feel stuffy. Another concern is that the author forgot about what Kel discusses at the start with his wife on system glitch and how they are involved, MC literally ignores about that topic about Kel's and his wife's involvement. Too much and too long system prompts to my liking. Last concern is regarding the pacing of the plot, it is too uneven......sometimes the story is too fast and sometimes it's dead slow. These are my concerns but overall it's worth a read for its unique setting and good writing quality. I hope the author corrects the negatives. Keep up the good work.

In bulk, If you like sci-fi and fantasy mashups with a system to boot this might be something you will like. However, the focus is more on the thought process, dilemmas and political problems the MC must face. And there are some small grammar errors here and there. The MC is granted surmountable power and authority in the world and may be considered "OP" from a combat/action/battle oriented novel. But as I said previously, while there are battles they are not the focus. At least not yet (ch 60). The characters are depicted with detail to their persona and aura, as well as basic descriptions of their physical age or general size and important aesthetic details. So far however, there hasn't been much character development aside for the MC. World building is extensive and the wold feels very large and complex. Not much attention has been given to the small interactions at the "street/backstreet" level yet. In conclusion, if you like giant interstellar worlds with magic and a conflicted MC who often encounters life altering dilemmas that will make you question your life, then you will like this.

Good world description and building. The character building is good. There could be more action but it does not detract too much from the story as of chapter 121.

This book is amazingly written. It is well thought out and makes it seem as if you are part of the story. All parts of the story seem as if it is real and is actually able to happen. I sincerely hope that when this novel is done that it will get published. I would definitely be one of the first people to buy this book! Hope it continues as well as it began. May blessings come upon you!

Amazing book with a well fleshed out story and actually readable writing (The english is grammatically correct unlike too many other originals on here). My only gipe whas the whole SYSTEM, system thing was a bit confusing, and honestly I though S-prime was an even worse name. I think it would be worth the time to come up with some more unique names for the two things (like primordial nexus, alpha genesis, or world fragment or something) but thats just my personal take. Keep up the good work!

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Let's say i have good time with this novel author-san. I enjoy the story', Chara building, and the system itself. But honestly i got some problem with the way you write the novel, it's but strange to me. Why? Because it's feel more like non-fiction book a.k.a like reading math book to me than read a novel. And i got confusing dialog here. I don't know who is speaking. But don't feel bad author-san you have great novel just with bit fix it Will be more great story'. Thanks for novel 😁

I think this novel can go great places the world being built is amazing the characters are getting fleshed out well and their fey i haven't seen many novels involving them as far as grammar I'm not a English major so I don't care so all in all a great read 👍👍👍👍