Reviews of Forbidden Forest by Wild_Bunni93 - Webnovel

I am waiting for some more chapter but this book is good the plot keep getting better and better. The development of the character are good this is a perfect fantasy book.

This is amazing book there are a few grammar errors that need to be fix but noting that will disturb you.The character are well written there is a bit of mystery behind the character background.

Although I'm not a ******** romance reader, I think you are doing a great job with this work. Your writing is of good quality, good story line, great workd building, great characters, I couldn't fault your FL despite those wild sex 😂. Keep it up.

I am excited that you’re adding more content and the trailer for your book is going to be really good and mystical. The way the story is written is so fascinating.

There are grammatical errors that can obstruct a reader, but nonetheless, with them fixed, I'm sure the novel is going to turn out incredible! The plotline appears cool so far.

The world you make seems really interesting. The story is great and I love it. I'm a fanatic of a fantasy genre and so far I love it. Great work author and I hope you have a good day.

This is a great story! Good job author! Keep up with the good work! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

I like your story and it's fantasy! I can only say that you continue your work and don't be discourage I gave you 5 stars couze you deserve it

Regardless a few errors the narration is readable. As far I've read I want to state a few notable things, on the top comes the plotline which is really interesting and comes up to a fantasy tale well. Moving onto the world building it would have been better if it was created with the fusion of dialogues or some incidental impacts rather than narrating it simply. The MCs is portrayed very well, an innocent and a little naive as I got her. So far a good work and a few readers prefer long chapters, the rest skips the paragraphs which results in omitting the useful information. In a nut shell it's worth checking stuff. ❤ Keep updating.

------Author------ Thank you for all my readers comment and Criticism i have add a few change to make everything run smoother. Thank you for your support and helping me Fix these areas.

This story is really good and I like how the characters have their own personalities and conflicts and plots. Novella shows someone being put in the middle of a conflicting situation and the process of her overcoming this trauma is interesting. 10/10 you should read.

C'mon girl, keep going, you've got us curious for what's next! I really liked how you built the world, and how you make it simple, nice and accessible to read. Perhaps a re editing can organize and make things perfect. What matters most is the story, and it's good material. Your style is light, even if not everything in the story is. Will keep following your novel.

I love this book. the details are on point i love how the story have twisted and turns in your book. you have a very creative mind to come with the characters and the plots.

Heads up: I don't really sugarcoat a lot of things with edits. I think that the world you paint is an interesting one. From the first chapter, you paint a vivid description of the land that helps bring the reader into the story that you have created. However, I would definitely recommend breaking up some of the larger paragraphs because it does seem to be somewhat of an info dump instead of weaving everything subtly into the storyline. My final note was that I was not at all prepared for this story to be mature??? Like I personally do not read uhh those scenes, so I was very taken aback when it came up. So just for a suggestion: maybe have a warning at the top of the chapter or list your novel as mature?

The world in this story seems very interesting. The story background was described very clearly and I enjoy fantasy books a lot. Ezra's character design sounds great. There are some grammar mistakes and punctuation. Remember to put the space after the comma and the periods, not before. Other than that, it's good.

The details of this story is amazing. The author created a very beautiful world right from the start. Each characters were also described really well, as a reader you can see how meticulous everything was written. Each chapter is long, so for all of you fantasy readers out there, this is such a good treat! There was one scene that I am not comfortable with, so I chose to skip it. But overall, it was still an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing this world with me!

Ezra sound real cute and fearless plus Novella is that classic mean Girl.There was a crazy plot twist at the end of the Chapter that i wasn't expecting.

This is a really great book, it keeps you on your toes I will keep reading to find out what lies ahead fir erza, I love fantasy books so this is a plus it’s interesting how everything is set up..to how the characters personalities and traits clash against each other. The author really did her best with this is an awesome book