I have never read a chapter of a story and felt it's completeness like this has made me feel. I felt it all, the emotions roped me in. The loyalty, feeling, the death, the everything. It hit my heart so much, I was greatly moved. Dear Author, you have done a great job. I am highly impressed. I decided to read after reading the first review and it was truly worth it. Please read this book, it won't take long but it will feel whole nevertheless. I love it so much❣️
Wow! How was just a single chapter able to leave such an impact of sadness in me? I feel bad for the two characters this story is centered around.
The writing quality has no flaws whatsoever. There are few places where word choice could have been better but that's okay. The way the story develops is the real charm. It slowly reveals more and more information that made me start liking the two characters. And the ending happened in a way I had never expected it would at the start and it was actually great.
I implore those reading this review to give it a try. It will not take long since it's just one chapter but you will like it. Believe me!
Amazing work, author!
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