Reviews of Redacted by Hyowha - Webnovel

I'm usually not a fan of writing a review for myself, as I deem it unprofessional. Thankfully, this book is everything else than professional—if you want to read a serious story, I advise you to visit my other novel 'Rebirth of a Broken Demoness', however, if what you are looking for is a fun and carefree one, you'd be right to stay. As the synopsis alluded, this story has a system and a store—two very common genres on this website, I believe. Maybe you have noticed, but years before, system-novels were primarily parodies (History's number 1 Founder, black-tech internet cafe, IRAS, Ultimate scheming system, strongest system etc.). They made fun of gaming novels and its ridiculous trope of adding 'luck' (like a lottery, RNG or monster drops) as a major story-point in a universe entirely controlled by the author. A system is a deus ex machina, and these authors knew it. But now, with more and more systems-novels surfacing, what was once parody has turned into seriousness, and the comical ideas of an almighty system is lost in these new books—oh, the irony. So I write this story to bring back what was once lost, in a sea of system-novels that has lost its core. Yes, this is a parody on a parody. This story is about life and death. A story beyond fate, and what it means to be alive in the face of death... or something like that. Read it, that's why are here after all. —and that is why I shamelessly decided to give me 5 stars. I mean, if I do it, at least go all the way, right?

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I like how there's nothing to read. It really emphasizes the void the story represents. The discomfort I felt when I first came across this was substantial, and I don't think I want it to happen again. If I could, I would award it a 0 star rating.

The story overall was really good, I started out with a few chapters feeling a little skeptical as this genre is not usually my cup of tea (I'm sort of a picky reader), but this is written well and the development is consistent to the story. I'll keep reading on, keep up the good work!

Okay, Hyowha. You did say this book wasn't so serious, so I will consider that. Overall, the character interactions in this book is hilarious. I enjoyed reading it. Your grammar was also on point. I liked reading it. However, your world-building could be better. A question: Does the cover function as clickbait? Ha ha.

Don't let the cover cloud your senses 😂 , this is a very good novel. The charactes' designs are well on point, the storyline is clear right from the synopsis and it progresses well. The writing quality is top notch too. And the world? Immaculate. Well done. Keep up the good work.

I’m wowed. For a light, comedic novel, this fits the bill perfectly with the two protagonists’ banter. Additionally, I can tell the author is well experienced from the smooth transitions, enhancing my immersion immensely ! I cannot say much about grammar bc I hardly — yes like I can count on my fingers — found any errors. [ Thumbs up ] All in all, I found this a pleasure to read, so keep up the good work, Author !

Perfect for light reading!! The plot is interesting and stands out from others. Story is well written and full of humor! Keep it up author!!!

Interesting take on the writing style. Story is pretty interesting thus far. MC is especially a peculiar one. Must say based on what I've read so far I really can't find anything to mark you down for so just take my 5

I liked the synopsis so I gave it a try and I got hooked. I like the comedy in this story very much. The store is a fun packed place to visit for sure

Author please don't drop this novel its really good and i think i'm not the only one who wants you to continue the story.. #iwantmoreupdatessss 📣📣😍😍

The storyline is very interesting..... The concept of the story is copied from the novel black tech internet cafe... But the story is well-executed till chapter 40... And the story is kind of intriguing... But the worst point of the novel is that the author does not upload chapter regularly... But the story is worth reading...

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Great freaking story!!! Worth the read for sure The characters are great Cant wait for more characters and instances I hope my fate allows some more chapters of this novel in the future Please author give me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=update]

Please, don't abandon this work of art, that would be a crime against all art stands for, this is one of the best books I have ever read and I don't want to stop just like that

Trully one of the funniest, and interesting books i've read.The story is unique and uses its characters really well. I hope the re is more chapters because the last one was nearly a month ago...

It’s a really good story, with characters that could always put a smile on your face. The interactions between the main character and the system are always funny. The only bad things i could think about this book is it’s lack of upload.

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Great story, there's great world building and character building in it the grammar errors are very low and the story is easy to follow only down side is inconsistent updates. Story is definitely worth the read I hope this story gets up updated more often.

Author has done a really great job here. Readers can see that author was really meticulous. Every single detail was described intricately. When the light traveled, or when the system changed themselves or their thought process, every-single-details. The progress of the story is well paced too. I only read until chapter 15+ so far. But overall it's recommended. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!

What a very unique story. Blows your mind, at least mine. Haha. The humor incorporated in the story really makes you read on. I can imagine, this MC will have much story to tell having lived so long. The novel is perfectly written as well, the grammar and word usage brings it a notch higher. Looking forward to learn from this novel and good luck to you, author.

The story is quite unique. I feel like I'm playing a video game. BTW is the Thousand Myriads part of some culture? I see it quite a lot in the Asian novels but I don't know what it is exactly. Anyways, the grammar is great, the narrative is smooth and the story is engaging.

This is one of the few novels that I would say have as high of a quality as the top novels it's like the one great novel about selling modern technology to cultivators but it is much more entertaining I would put it at a way of the devil/10 in quality. Just pump out like 3000 more chapters every day and I'll be happy.

This book is amazing.. The mc is unique.. The system is unique.. The plot is unique.. Its trully refreshing to read.. Really recomend this book for anyone who didnt have anything to read.. 😁😁😁

The author has created a wonderful and comedic world which I've already fallen in love with. The characters are diverse, and well developed. If I was to say one complaint, I can't get enough of this story, although the author puts out at least a chapter a day which is already really good and appreciated! I can't wait to see where the story goes next!

amazing webnovel i love it god i hate that i have to have 140 charaters just read it you wont regret it its great and is just getting better so far

(As of chapter 19) Writing quality: Is actually good. I haven't found any problems reading it and if there was a mistake I don't remember it because it was probably something very minor which didn't inhibit my reading. So 5/5 Update rate: Update everyday I believe. So 5/5 Story development: So far so good. The comedic undertone is pretty funny and story itself is pretty captivating in itself. Like the author said it's a light hearted (almost slice of life with wuxia or whatever it's called elements atm). I honestly like it so far. It's kind of like that new novel that came out recently here with the dad and daughter and restaurant system(drawing a blank on the title atm) that what it reminds me of at least. Character design: Can't say a lot since there's not much source to base it on. However the MC and system is a comedic duo with fun interactions. There isn't really anything to write home about rn but it'll most likely get fleshed out as more chapters come out. World background: Can't say much rn but it's very chinese martial art novel-esque and the world is bigger than it seems at first glance? Overall it's an enjoyable read if you're looking for something light with good updates and writing quality. I'm enjoying it so you might too!

Wow, I've read some stories that includes system on it but this is the only novel that I have enjoyed so far. I love all of the chapters and very different from the others! The others are more on the serious type while this one is very comedic. I love it. Thanks, author!

This is Brandon gould I am responding to a request for a review swap. I will leave a review on your book if you leave a review on my book Demonsong. From the chapters I read, it sounds like a great book. I am very much enjoying it I will make sure to read more