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DaoistnzE5Fa
Only real problem with this novel is the HORRIBLE grammar. It actually gets worse the further you read, somehow. It is a nice plot, though I'd say the continental part is a bit too fast. I wouldn't mind Mc to interact more with the people in the beginning, instead of purely focusing on progressing.
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llama_gaming_99
I love all the books by this author I'm completely caught up on mind God and I would just love to say love your work and that I can't wait to see now by you
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ICallOutIdiots
I cant take this book seriously. so my man artic dies by helping a woman, sO what does he fucking do after his transmigiration?!?! Thats right! NOT ONLY HELP A FUVKING WOMAN, GOVE HER KNOWLEDGE. precious Knowledge that is literally how people gain power!!! Oh uea dont forget the fucking broken power system. the power system is based on β€œlaws” which can give you numerous abilities given how knowledgable you are, so if you arent seeing the problem here ill tell you, THE KNOWLEDGE IS SHARABLE, IF THERES A SINGLE GOD OUT THERE THEN THE ENTIRE WORLD CAN BE INFESTED BY GODS. I mean sure there are law againts doing this, this is kept in order by the other gods but theres nothing they could do if someone decides to do this, well untill its too late atleast. what stopping a man from printing books and books of knowlede Of Laws that can help you become a god and spread them across the world?! By the time Anyone noticed itll be too fucking late. if iM to talk about charectors, all ill say is thier dogshit, plain, and unintresting im every way possible. Hell the main charector is pretty much a Robot whos knowledable in Random shiT, who Knows why. The typos In the bigining of the storys are inumarable and countless. this is not helped by the fact How author changes Names and titles every other fucking chapter for no absolutefucking reason. All in all I lost a few fucking iq points. i dont Want to put the author down in any way shape or form but All im saying is, its a intresting idea but The author stumbles on the execution terribly. this is for the first few cHapters btw, so no doubt the autho got as the chapters went but i Just cant stand the First 50.
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Mick_Levesque
If you like a book where you never know what is going to happen this is the one. If you like action,intelligence and knowledge, this is the book. The story in itself is original as much as you can find on webnovel and the MC is someone you can relate in certain ways. This story is one i can really get into it without thinking too much. The only downside is the writing,there is lot of (when i say a lot theres a f*****g lot) if gender miswap and names swap so you sometime find the need to reread the sentences you you just read.
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heavenlyfall
this story is OK but it could have been GREAT if it better grammar and was edited a bit but overall it's a bit πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘
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Santhekiller16
I like this novel because it is perfectly balanced, I was wondering why the mc is getting so op so fast but it all makes sense. the author was building suspense and then made the mc look weak. so he can rise again then fall back down by finding a higher realm. so the story stays interesting as you go on. this novel has a balance between op and weak the author made it so the mc can find a higher realm but that realm has higher beings so he back to the start then he can rise up again and again.
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Doomseed
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Isekai_Truck_kun
Is there any romance in the story because i am at chapter 103 and it isn’t there. will it be there in later chapter? The story is really nice except for the translation. I got used to the translation and really liked the story
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void_shadow
to be honest..it's been so long I hope for the author to update it...it has a pretty interesting draft or world build as it is not the same like any other type..it has a unique thing that interest me such as his law power .. although the power level could be quite hard to understand...I just hope the author to update it as it was nice and something new to me
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Ummmname
Overall the novel was pretty alright in my opinion. The story had cool characters and plot points throughout,but, they weren't explored very well. I'm not the author but it felt like the pacing was a little fast and conflicts that I would think take longer took only a couple of chapters.
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SRyan_Bell
What a man thinketh so is he!!! This man thought himself to Godhood and beyond with the help of his system snsnajanansnsnsnsnsnsnsnnnsnsnsns
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1nick1
Pretty good concept that went apesh!t on the grammar mistakes and nonsense with the world building and power levels. I have nothing more to say about this absolute hell fest.
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Vaibhav_Vinu
to put it simply this book is the perfect example of a very good concept completly destroyed by dreadful grammer and even horrible story progression..i understand the MC having an edge over everyone else becase of the scince from his old world helping him comprehend stuff better but all he seems to do is recitate facts like a bloody walking wikipedia and boom..he goes from mortal to demigod in THREE!. days.and even with all this knowledge he eventually used all his "prodigious insight" from his world to become the god of CHESS ..i stopped reading at that point....
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Jiel_Ares
It's a good story not only because it's a fantasy story it's also because how the author combine his research to its story itself. He made a research about the ability of the main character .
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argentum_luna
I really love the concept of the book but the writing and development are REALLY bad so even though it's an amazing idea I couldn't get to chapter 50 it got so bad... if this were to be rewritten then I'd read it in a heart beat but it's just to poorly done I swear some of my brain cells were dying... there was about five spelling mistakes per PARAGRAPH the first character you meet seems important but you NEVER see them again from what I can tell and it goes WAY to quickly in my opinion...
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Vladarius
well i hope u guys learn from my mistake, trash like these, don't deserve any long or well devised reviews if they cant appreciate em. go suck a nut you fekin nub, im sure u don't even know the difference between, then and than, you're and your. lmao.
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Jkesse
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Jkesse

Great story from what ive read. But sadly you desperately need an editor. The overall flow of the book is great. I assume english isnt your first language?
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s2000
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s2000

2 is a stretch to me. The direction of the story's quality saved it from being a 1. The grammar and writing quality butchered the novel. The novel had a good story with the laws and mc's character, but again the writing quality completely butchered the story. I am not expecting professional but it's worse than machine translations. You will need to reread and hope you understood it right to not be confused. (Some titles, names, and numbers are not consistent) and got switched which threw me off. Some facts are like copy and paste. Even more the novel was like random words to make the certain word count. The novel had potential but the writing quality discouraged me from continuing reading
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Arret
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Arret

The beginning is interesting, this whole system and laws with philosophy. A quick increase in the strength of the hero is logical. But over time, there has been no balance in the power of abilities (this is somewhere around chapter 15). After a couple of chapters, it is clear that the balance is not needed because the storyline has changed dramatically. In general, the same feeling when you sleep and see very vivid dreams that constantly change each other, and in the morning there is only confusion and confusion in the head.
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GASTER
it was a very interesting read until chapter 10. i do realize that the authors main language is Turkish but the story is hard to follow and read the character gets op . there is also a lack of explanation in what laws and the MC shows no sort of psychological growth at all and the side characters its are very shallow its a good read if you want to binge but wont be making you come back again. another problem is that the pacing is absolute ****
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Zzasicker_Bravado
grammar makes you want to vomit, main character personality is all over the place. (ie on earth he is a really nice man, like how he saved a female traveler at the start... later on when he gets stronger someone gets impaled by a water spear by their teacher in front of him because person offended him{person said get out of my chair or something equivalent} and he did not care at all.(there's so many more examples of this as well). the foundation of the story is unique, interesting and new I love the idea of growing by understanding the laws of the world, but author you need to improve before trying to write a concept like this, its too hard for someone of your skill level to try this
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cooltom4321
although the idea and theme is good, I find the character far too generous, as he gives away knowledge too easily. being nice is fine but he should at least ensure he gets something decent out of an exchange. in addition, the idea that they simply have to say phrases about the way things work to gain power seems ridiculous as they should have to understand the words first. otherwise people could just say random stuff until it works, then share that. however from what i can tell, the author does at least upload a lot
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Grabbler
Awful grammar, flat characters, cliche situations and encounters directly from xianxia, inconsistency everywhere. Most abilities are used once or NOT EVE ONCE before being not just forgotten, but deleted. After all the time spent reading their descriptions. First chapters is basically a wikipedia copypaste while later ones are simply not making sense. And the plot holes the size of a galaxy. Oh, and don't get me started about chess-related stuff. As a CM, I was cringing till I dropped despite previously wanting to check just how deep this rabbit hole is. I'm really wondering about those five star reviews through. Oh,and I judging by comment, negative reviews are deleted. Good job.
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Rukimedsu
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GoldenFoxs
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CassTheEevee
The first 30 or so chapters are really really good but at that point the author completely scraps the power system and nerfs the mc, so from around chapter 40 onwards its crap, he has the ability to use these chess pieces that dont do much, so my recommendation is to read until the point where Arctic stops using laws then trash the book, just a fair warning
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DartUpdates
It's ****. There is very high potential but the author ruined it all. You shouldn't be doing a reset on his character like he is just a toy. He was a human then he physically turned into a "demon" and he starts to kind of act like one when he has been a human his whole life and one insignificant ***** hates on him and turns his personality all corrupt.
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syedsaid95
It's okay i guess. Keep on trying ok author. Keep it up. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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