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Animelove1
Dude I donβt care about things being done over and over again, they just have to be fun to read, and sir author your story is fun to read thank you for writing it and bringing a little extra joy into my life keep up the good work ππ½
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Sarjeel_Sayeed
This is a really good harem system which makes you powerful but the main objective is to get a harem. So far I like the character development but did this novel end already?
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Baticus
A new viewpoint on the harem story. With the tale being set in the Seikeri world. Story has plenty of room for expansion if the author decides to run with it.
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SteveBurger
Writing Quality 4/5
Few grammatical errors and the story is structured well enough.
Stability of Updates 3/5
Although the author updated regularly, it's been a few months.
Story Development 2/5
So far, the MC just arrives in a world, just throws the plot out of the window and we can't see anything other than an OP MC getting lucky while doing what he likes. No hardships, no challenges, no difficult goals, no spice.
Character Design 2/5
The MC is a damn brat. He gets amazing powers for doing nothing and then gets angry and actually starts yelling at his system for asking a few hundred/thousand points in order to unlock a feature. He immediately forgets that he has gathered several million points in less than two days for kissing a girl and banging her.
World Background 3/5
The reason the rating isn't less is because I'm giving the story a chance. to expand on it. However, what we already have is something that most would forget.
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Evgenyz_Chspko
ΠΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΠΈΠ½ΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΎ . Π₯ΠΎΡΠ΅ΡΡΡ ΠΏΠΎΡΠΊΠΎΡΠ΅Π΅ ΡΠ·Π½Π°ΡΡ, ΡΡΠΎ Π±ΡΠ΄Π΅Ρ Π΄Π°Π»ΡΡΠ΅ ΠΈ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ ΠΎΠ½ Π±ΡΠ΄Π΅Ρ Π²ΡΠ΅Ρ
ΡΠ΄ΠΎΠ²Π»Π΅ΡΠ²ΠΎΡΡΡΡ. ΠΠΎΠ³Π΄Π° Π±ΡΠ΄Π΅Ρ ΠΏΡΠΎΠ΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅????????????????????????
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Raju_7690
Good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel
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Daoist815835
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gianca
hey author-san please don't this fantastic novel , give some more chapters , at least once a week , sekirei harem was a great idea , reminds me of Parallel Paradise manga
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FanFicFun
Exactly what in the rating.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... I'm bored...
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SableyeDarkMoon
I realy appreciate the word background and the plot. I would like if the author will dedicate more space to the female characters even if they are from a manga.
I'm looking forward to the new chapters and dtory development.
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Big_brother_coming
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99prcntBibliophile
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VaL7
Gw belum baca, tapi ngelihat sama2 orang indo, kubantu bintang 5 dulu. Hahahaa.
Moga sukses terus...
Lanjutkan pemersatu bangsa. Wkwkwk
Lanjutkan.
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Yosomith
Pretty good Sekirei fanfic, really enjoyed reading it, didn't think I would. Looking forward to see what happens next though it seems updates have dwindled off a bit.
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GoD_SovereignJ
Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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Otakubaku
My good man, while I can respect that people need a break at least tell us or tell someone who could tell us, its hard cuz sekirei has always been a top favourite and now you made this beauty, while you stopped I've wanted come back to it, see it with a notification saying a new chap came out so please at least hit me with the truth of whether or not it's done because I've leading myself on to believe your coming back man.... Just a clear resolution would be nice at least.
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PUERKO_Senpai
is this drop...
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Daoist534697
I think author has done a great job for describing the plot in the novel he knew that where things should be put together so i will say to those novel harem seeking friend that it is a good novel.
You will love every part of it, be it girls or mc.
I think if u like this novel then support tbe author so that it can update the novel as per time.
Author plz update the novel regularly this is my dearest wish
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Bobo_Knives
Great Novel_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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mosinwb01g
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starking
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Litrex1
I do not mind the mc being this strong, but there are things i would like. Ways for him to make his girls stronger, but not in just for example giving all magic affinitys to them. I would like the girls power atleast to be unique. So perhaps make the girls special powers stronger, or an upgraded version of their power. I donβt mind him picking up girls like pokemons, just donβt make every girl into blank sheet of paper. Give some or all depends on author some varying depths into their characters, personalities or story.
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TFH
I really like that you decided to make a Sekirei FF, the grammar is really good and each character has their own personality.
My only problem is that you decided to rush things way to fast to my liking and instead of making mc stronger little by little, he is already the strongest in his current world in less than a day, he went from being a Normal person with F in stats to being a SS in stats, where each upgrade is 10 times stronger.... not to mention he went from harem novice to harem king in a day too.
Lastly, i find it sad that MC can only stay in Sekirei world 1 week only.... you could have made him stay a year at least, it feels WAAAY to rushed.
Also in last chapter he took in 6 new sekirei but just their names were spoken and no mention of their personality... Just glossed over like, i took 6 new girls.... I hope that you can make it work with the harem since with more girls some are bound to be left as just a number in the background and have no active part in the story, i wish that dosnt happens and EACH girl you add to the harem has their own role and be part of the story
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Sommerscave
It's nice seeing the author put his heart and soul into his work. Making this wonderful story a reality (do you know what I mean?). It's nice and the story starts in the Sekirei world. Where it goes from there is still unclear to me. Thanks for the hard work author.
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Dino1971
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Dino1971
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Dino1971
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Cherry_And_Cream
La historia en general es buena, los personajes estΓ‘n bien y el desarrollo se tiene que trabajar mΓ‘s. Se sugiere profundizar las relaciones de los personajes o maximizar la cantidad de sekirie sin alas.
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LucasRoc
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