Ahahahahah, Locking chapters from chapter 11? That alone deserves 1* rating, whoever decided on that, heres my message to you: Congratulations on being a dumbass who ended up fcking things up for yourself.
This novel had the potential to be a great novel but it unfortunately it wasn't able to reach it's full potential and we ended up with a very mediocre novel
Characters are boring,story development is bad
World building is bad
Story progressing is bad and there is many unnecessary stuff in it and it is full of maggufins
Power system is bad
And the whole novel is bad, a pure waste of time
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I read this elsewhere but decided to write a review somewhere visible.
The story is pretty nice and the characters feel alive. I saw someone bitching about the FL, the person reviewing is right for only some time because she does become quite strong and important without our MC later on. The writing could be a bit better but nothing special.
Also, who made the wiki?
For everybody here that is pissy about it being premium I just want to say that you are idiots. Review the quality of the work, not the BS that is webnovel.
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Hi there i thought id just Put it here that if you go to novel full .com you can get this ENTIRE novel for free without paying premium and i do admit that this novel has a few problems with grammar and all but its still a pretty damn good read but please do support the author if possible as when you write a novel it certainly isnt easy so support them and read the novel im sure it will tickle the fancy of some of you out there. also the great sea otter blesses you with a good novel! stay safe in this trying time you glorious people!!
I love the story, until a dumb woman who's not at all helpful apart from draining funds from MC and getting kidnapped come into the scene. MC is okay. He's smart. He's got character too and is not a heartless beast. But he turns into a moron because of that certain damnable useless white lotus who has saintly disposition but is still out-and-out a good for nothing.
It's a pretty poor story overall. Most of the characters are bland, the mc is pretty boring as well. The revenge story would have made more sense if he wasn't falling for an exact copy of the woman he loved before reincarnating. It really undercuts his anger to both the man that killed him and all the other stuff because he so quickly develops feelings for her regardless of what the author tries to say.
I just realised that in webnovel you can post a review without ever reading the actual story. I can't imagine who would be stupid enough to overlook such an important feature in a website where people's very livelihoods are dependent on the amount of people willing to spend spirit stones to read their "top rated novels" smh 😑
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I read this novel, and i thought its just like a piss off chinese novel, and predictabl plot, but honestly its actually good, i finished the 171 and im hungry for more, this novel, has its own unique way of presenting the plots, looking forward for the romance, the past life did help the mc to be strong, but he still cant beat anything, he uses his mind to make strategy, its amazing. He is not dumb "surpring :D"
its drawback is just early premium, you didnt give the readers to evaluate the novel, thats why many are giving up to this novel, this novel was ruined because of this but anyway because i was impressed and find this novel good, ill give this 5 star, treat is as support for this novel. Hope this novel go on.
I've been reading novels for 5 years now, and this is are one of the few novels that make me want more, the story has intense feeling in it, romance, and i guess kingdom building? Or he will just overthrow the kingdom, go to his revenge? Idk "Spoiler" XD
This...I don't know what to say, the translation itself is good, but the story......for me it's lacking in character design, the MC is kind of an idiot? Not reflecting his former power as an 9th circle mage...the first 2 or 3 chapter are full of "hatred" of the MC and it doesn't show how "calmly" a 9th circle mage that "beat" a devil for his power should act in a situation like that...and for me that's to irrational, honestly by chapter 4 I already dropped this, again it's not about the translation more of story in itself that make me give this review
Had a good start and was going strong for the first 10 chapters in a story sense but the editing could use work but the fact that it goes premium at chapter 10 kill the novel entirely and makes the author come off as selfish and short sighted and only in it for the money