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4.66

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CHAOS_FOOLISH
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
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Blessing_t
i like this cover better it suits the story line more well done author good job
1mth
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johannn
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johannn

it is nice to complete this book looking forward your new book
1mth
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Grandonk
nice story good plot i alway enjoys reading it
1mth
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Demon_6746
lovely fantasy story .....nice ...........πŸ₯°
4mth
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Alex081904
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Daoist4ggfzZ
tΓ΄i mong cuα»‘n tiểu thuyαΊΏt cΓ³ thể mΓ΄ tαΊ£ nhiều hΖ‘n về loαΊ‘n luΓ’n
11mth
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alexandru1
is there gonna be cultivation or smth later on?
1yr
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Darlinn_
Great story, but i hope the mother and aunt get their position back as best girls. I know fei is good but I like his mother and aunt for that place. I mean he forgot what his mother and aunt did for years just because they were angry at him.
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1yr
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I_Only_Love_Milfs
One of my favourite wish fulfilment novels..
1yr
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_Nyx_Wk_
This is good so far.(i've read till chapter 1454).i like the harem.all of them are older than mc.(i have a thing for older women.😢).mc is not a beta so its okay. but in recent chapters face slapping young masters thingy kind of became repetitive and his harem girls teasing became little annoying.dont get me wrong im not telling they always need to act reserved with him but now it become bit overbearing.anyway its my personal opinion and im not criticizing author. overall its a still good book so keep it up author san...πŸ‘
1yr
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Fantasy_king
hi author, I want to suggest something in the latest chapters, XT has some argument with Teng Qigang, now we all know TQ will contact his boss ( Cao Song). Cao song will find different way to harm / kill XT or XT's loved ones and XT will have to do much things to save them. Author, we all know this kind of story plot and it's toooooo boring 🀧. if it 1,2 times then it's okay but it's not good to keep repeating it. We all readers have read this kind of plot thousands of time. So I want to suggest something. why not make XT kind of Anti-hero / evil mc. He is gang leader, add some detective kind people group for him. who collects all information for him and keep him updated about new rising stars or his competitor in current scenario. so it is kind of information network for XT. Now if you make story like after XT Argus with Teng Qigang. XT will ask his information group to find all details about Teng Qigang, his background and his boss and all thing. XT will plan to destroy Cao Song and Teng Qigang before even they can do anything to XT. this kind of anti-hero feels much better than that boring same hero plot. XT will use this group to find all competitor and destory them before they even know who's is planning in background. please consider this suggestion and see if you can add it in upcoming story plot. 😁😁
1yr
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Alex081904
πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’• . . . . . . . . . πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
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1yr
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rogerven
I remember reading this years ago when it first came out and it was free lol how times change and every thing becomes how much money can I get from everything
1yr
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Fantasy_king
I have posted multiple comments before this. I really like this novel. please upload 2 chapters/ day like u used to upload it before . thank you
1yr
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You_Did_Well
I've read till the mc made his company but is this story does have power/cultivation? The last time I read this is a long time ago and that's just when the mmc made his company. Please tell me if it does/doesn't have power thingy.
1yr
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DaoistHCqiMr
this book is one of my best choices and I think it will help inspire other members to enjoy their tym while reading and sharing information with others
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1yr
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Azrael_DAngel
I really love this novel but I hope this will be not like those Chinese novels where at the end of the novel love interests never got into the harem...........and that its already the last volume I hope you will not mess his harem and will clarify everything and not rush the ending cause there are many confusing matters, seriously I don't want to regret reading it and getting depressed
1yr
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LonelySpine
When I started reading this book then, I thought it's a book that won't last and just stop before reaching a thousand chapters, similar to other books. Fortunately, the author proof me wrong and the book gets more interesting as it cross the thousand. @ author, since we reached the last volume, how many chapters should we be expecting more before the book finally gets it's ending? How does the affect the mc and his harem? Would it be similar to other books that just rush to finish the book or will you proof me wrong again, unlike others, that this book will have a befitting ending.
1yr
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pasito_tun_tun
I don't understand why authors or translators publish stories in English or Spanish but use Chinese/Korean names. If you are NOT Korean or Chinese it is almost impossible to differentiate the names of the Asian characters. There are 5 star ratings that are spam, and that's why I'm giving it 1 star.
1yr
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Tales_King
Thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
1yr
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Destroyer_1NL
author , this novel is really a piece of art.Keep on this , your story development a bit rush but character design 10/10.If it's not for update stability it would be overall 5 rating.Afterwall I am a man of Culture and there was no way I will turn my back on your novel
1yr
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djumbo
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djumbo

The cultrivation system in the novel isn't bad, nor is it good. The plot is repetitive and every single girl he has gotten always has him saving her from 2 gang members lol. It is like women cannot drive in the novel. The mc is not smart, but you have to always keep in mind in this "he is...". His idea's are elementary level. Legit a six grader could come up with them all. He believes he is still in his old life so he is unstoppable... but in reality his daddy who he screws over has been protecting him in secret.He has zero personality or loyalty. Truly he would stab his own mother in the back if she prevented him from screwing some random waitress. This entire novel is trash. sadly I DON'T mind this and i am currently caught up over 1000 chapters. I do not expect change or him to have character development. It is like a bad tv show that is fun to watch with nothing else to do. so check it out when you have nothing to read lol
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2yr
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Sexyboi21
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2yr
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Sohan_Ahmed
Am giving it 5 stars because it’s really good story. you gave each women a good background story not just any women added to the haram. I stopped when u made the mother and aunt just ordinary characters. They are the special characters but you made it out to be there fault that he cheating then you made him stop loving them unlike you built them in the 400 chapters. I skipped head 1000 chapters and yeh they are not special any more just girls in his haram
2yr
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Dark19
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Esta bueno. ........... .......... ............... ....... ........... ........... .. ...... ..... ...... ................ ............
2yr
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Dark19
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Dark19

Que siga asΓ­ porque esta muy buena la historia. ................... ................ ............. .......... ....... ............ ......
2yr
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PridefulRoyalty
Can anyone give me some basic background of the girls? I read this story up to that drama where the girls acted all cold and sheyt and i dropped it(even now i still think its unnecessary but whatever) but now i feel like reading this again but i forgot the characters, and I don't want to read again from the start.
2yr
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Freak_Kakuzaxe
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great_lord
Very interesting story, Keep going author... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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