Chapter comments on the chapter Reincarnated… of the book Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

You killed me with that short flashback. Totally wasn't expecting that "-FB End-" part; not there. lmao

**** me honestly author gotta say i read 2 paragraphs so far and im utterly disappointed... how could you let a sportscar take the limelight from truck-kun :(

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH AN INUZUKA MC!!!!! Just dont add a harem ad it'll be fantastic!!!!

Uhhh.. no mother would name their born child Yami, its literally mean darkness or despair

You're a pretty good writer from what I can tell so far. Also I have heard this is a ruthless/Villain mc so I am looking forward to it.

Needs to be fixed

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Evil MC is good but Please, at least dont make him lost his sense of filial piety like you portray in prologue.

cooool man frm ch 101

If this is before naruto let the MC have Kushina and Mikoto 😈

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Thanks for the chapter

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and waiting for new chapters to read

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for writing this chapter author great work! ♡

Thanks for the chap! Very interesting.

Terrible grammar

I'll probably read this to completion just because I like the premise, but why do you need to make all your mc's so detached from their families and stuff?