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thegreen_Moss
Wasted time on this one, it's kinda too darks MC powers up too easily and it doesn't feel fun n games he's in the dark side while being in the light the development in later stages is very rushed
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Yanis_Hoferick
to be honest I didn't think that would be so disappointed in the taste of fanfic readers but here we are.
my problem is , it's badly written like really,
to give you an example : Yami finished the ninja off then went to the other one killed him killed the next one ...
it's bland , there's no taste to it , and the MC is supposed to be a calculating MC etc ?? well he isnt't.
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MadFool
Writing quality is good and the grammar was decent. The plot worked out as well but what really made this disappointing is the attitude of the MC. He is like teflon; nothing sticks.
No meaningful relationships, just pure indifference or some negative emotions which led to no character development and made the experience of reading this kinda dull.
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readm
I was actually really excited about this story and it seemed like it had a lot of potential but honestly this is really badly translated feels like I'm reading something straight off of a Google translate Doc a bad one so yeah I gave up
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tedmosby2016
don't waste your time. it's Chinese wish fulfilment at its worst. HE r apes tsunade and gets her pregnant. That is all you need to know.
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lowenlyon
God Yami 4 the win
evil, but realistic and not that exaggerating like "I'm reborn so I'm OpP" thing
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HEMANG_SEN
This novel sucks . What on Earth man. How can people justify such a sick person. This story is for criminals and people who are constanly on watchlists
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J_Pog
Very good story. Improves massively in grammmar once he got an editor making it so much easier to read.
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Mister_Robot
This is written for kids that newly reached puberty and started jerking off. Cringe, Crass and wannabe is all I can say about this fic. Definitely the worst novel on any platform.
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JCT
few chapters and I'm getting sick of how the story play out getting stronger with no importance is a boring life full of hurdles
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Daoist_Viking
Do not read this book at chapter 91 the MC at the age of 12 r*pes thunade. This is discusting so do be warned.
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Ichiya_Vandalay
Mc is ruthless to his own poor mother. Dropped..................................................................................................
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comedyisland
The mc is basically a beta cuck larping as an alpha chad that thinks having to force people to respect him is indicative of his dominance over them.The authors later works are better, still worth the read.
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Nerdtron9001
The book is about a robot in the Naruto World. It is about a person who cares only for himself, to an excessive point. He would rather let people die, then take the ‘risk’ of telling them to move. This is in the middle of a war in the face of an inconsequential move that he can block with a percentage of his chakra. He would rather lose 5-10 allies then 15% of his chakra. And this was simply one example. He cares about himself to the point that he makes bad decisions. In some situation he makes a smart call, but in others he makes major mistakes. This isn’t usually an issue, but he doesn’t learn or grow from his mistakes. According to the Author, as he already lived one life he doesn’t need to grow as a person.
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giantking0809
One of the best novels on webnovel this is my second time reading this novel and the autor is amazing Yami’s character development is awesome and I really hope the author comes back and continues making novels as he is really good at it.
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Domme
My noble duty is to find harem novels that try to hide from the world by not saying they are in fact- harem..........................................
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SugarGodno1
guys ,i dont wanna be that guy,but dont r3ad this book. first there is a lot of ntr. its not traumatising if they r done to unknown character but who in the r8 mind ntrs jurya. this author doesn't love original work. this ff is just his way to fulfil his perverted mindset.also author didnt watch naruto and h3 is too du mb to write any good piece of work. in one instance mc gets ms just by torturing a uchiha. mind u, he didnt even have 2 tomoe before hand. also, author didnt respect the power system ,or was too focused on fvkng the females of the village that he became impatient and made his character kage level without putting work. there is r*pe, p3dophilia , killing his own child. the author is a pathetic human who in order to be edgy doesnt know the limit .he doesnt know how to write an evil character. so he projects things he thinks what evil character do. he must be a loser irl. plz d ont r3ad this if u like naruto.
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David_Salinas_9358
Men, estoy sin palabras después de leer toda la obra, sinceramente logré captar mediante tu obra como se refleja la codicia humana al extremo cuando hay un personaje que tiene una mentalidad psicópata y tiene una locura por el control,creo que en el fondo todos somos maníacos del control,pero no vamos al extremo por cuestiones morales,éticas y por los lazos con los seres queridos,pero eso no pasa con el MC. La mayor sorpresa que me llevo es que incluso después de interactuar durante tanto tiempo con varias personas que lograron amarlo, y querían ser su familia el MC no los valoro demasiado y los arrojó al margen. Todo para lograr su principal objetivo, la verdad el tipo sería un excelente empresario o político en la vida real. De igual forma muchas gracias por esta buen obra.
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Miami_XM
This is a sociopaths wet dream. Similar to Reverend Insanity, Mc doesn't care about anybody, calculating and manipulative as can be, with his only real goal being power. though towards the very end he does show he cares the tiniest bit about his 4 kids. So thats a bit of nice closure.
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Humbuub
I just can't stand the cringe. Trash, idk what's up w/ the high rating and views. This just shows how horrible the taste of the users of this app or there are just a lot of spam reviews.
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Dick_Wizard
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SpoilerMM
easily one of the best naruto fanfictions i read although some character’s can feel a bit oc but overall a good story with dark themes
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Mador
muy buena historia.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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eQzy
It was a really good story.
The main character has not departed from his personality a single step, and this is very pleasing.
All for the sake of efficiency, all for the sake of the dream.
I approve, accept and support!
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SOMMO_ARCANO
really good story, i would recommend it for veteran authors, mc trying to get stronger and survive, he has no armor plot luck or anything, mc focuses on one goal and try to achieve it also manages to survive various plots politicians and various fights using his wit, I highly recommend that you continue reading the story even if you don't like something because it is really worth it because it is really a quality story, excellent writing, excellent world background, characters faithful to the original even if with some changes thanks to the mc (it's noticeable and it's not like if mc does something nothing is affected, so this makes the story more real), even if it seems cold and calculating it's not quite but try to stay so not to die, still a great story
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covestar
First fanfic completed, thing got weird after the forest 20 chapters but picked up again. Some minor grammar errors but was still readable. Have not ready many fanfics better than this
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