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latheef_shaik
the fanfic is very good , trap OCS are very rare .
so matter what many people or others will say don't change it .trap ocs are very good . I very much liked ray and other OCS . I hope you will good books In the future
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Master_Of_gu
A childish novel that is difficult to watch, unfortunately, the hero is childish, trying to act smart, but he is stupid. Of course there is no evil, but the attempt of a small child to do bad things and think that they are evil
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InHisName
What a disturbing story.
This author has the most disturbing tendency to integrate the worst of fetishes into his story. The plot would be good if only the author focused more on the story.
This story deserves its low ratings.
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Eternal_Sag3
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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
masterpiece, it is a comedy work, whoever low marks for a comedy work is because they took the work seriously and got it wrong
masterpiece, it is a comedy work, whoever low marks for a comedy work is because they took the work seriously and got it wrong
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Mental
I honestly want to give this a try, but after reading a couple of MCU fanfics, and then the mc goes and lowers his head to Ancient One, i basically stopped trying.
So whenever i see a mention of that (chapter's title/synopsis/...) i just skip.
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MySoupotamia
Honestly you couldve just said that the MC has a girlish voice in the beginning but instead you have to constantly write it down and it frankly got annoying. The characters arent bad per say but they feel odd if I do say so myself. I personally dont like the pacing since sometimes it makes me confused
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Maurz
1 star for the traps 1 star for the traps 1 star for the traps 1 star for the traps 1 star for the traps 1 star for the traps 1 star for the traps
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Spike009
The whole novel is all over the place . Story is ****ed. Mc is male but acts like a woman with girlish voice . Seriously this novel gets on your nerve very soon
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Tony_Wong
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BobDole
Don't read this if you want a good story, or good characters. This is just meant to be a funny troll story. The MC gets trolled by the universe. And the writer trolls us.
So if you maybe want to laugh, give it a shot. Otherwise, find another story.
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Hacku
I think the author should add a beta-male tag to the novel. I think the author should add a beta-male tag to the novel. I think the author should add a beta-male tag to the novel. I think the author should add a beta-male tag to the novel. I think the author should add a beta-male tag to the novel. I think the author should add a beta-male tag to the novel.
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Xlp
This is my first time writing a review, so i'm sorry if i don't do this correctly.
I'd like to say, in my possibly not so humble opinion, that i love this story. If you want an overpowered MC, who also happens not to give a flying potato about the plot (not really but if you decide to read you'll understand).
Yes there are one or two parts that are kinda....not perfectly done....we're human we make mistakes.
This story, this one right here....is comedy gold (please remember this is my opinion, anyone who disagrees can go have a manliest man contest with Butch). I did my best not to include spoilers of any sort so this review is plain, BUT, I love this novel even if i have to give it a fair review and not just give a full 5 stars like i was tempted to.
Final piece of advice is that if you can get even to chapter 10 or probably not even as far as that, you'd find the beauty of this story.
Thank you again Author-sama!
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ProSpect
Honestly all the "girlish voice" cr*p ruined it for me, otherwise it was ok-ish
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Djabilong
This is honestly amazing. If you go into this, don't expect to get an orthodox Marvel fic, instead this is basically a semi-random, semi-focused story about an shameless-evil-xianxia-cultivator-shota-trap (that's a thing that exists, yes) who makes people miserable for profit and funzies.
...with Marvel characters sprinkled on top, but that's secondary to mc's escapades and numerous sidestories going that take place at the same time as the main plot, but have absolutely nothing to do with it.
The other half of the fun is observing how author consistently keeps openly trolling the most vocal audience, which leads to them screeching and their behinds spontaneously combusting on fire.
This is incredibly artful ****posting, truly amazing.
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GOD_OF_ENAS
Well it's should be read as reborn in marvel pedophile Universe it's **** from the anus don't waste ur time this **** is messed up I never write a review ever so get it how ****t it is
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Munchnax
Honestly this novel would be great if the author didnβt keep forcing a fetish on the reader... itβs to the point where I just delete the lines that say βIn a girlish voiceβ if that was deleted and his shemale fetish being thrust upon he reader every chapter itβd be an honest to God good story.
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DragonslayerKnight
This pedophilia crap disgusting. Seriously if your into homosexuality then just be upfront with your preferences. Gender bending traps voice of little girl WTF this dude 37 and someone asking if it's a child. Your one sick pedophile freak please have a horrible life.
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Gutterstomp
Why has every character in the marvel changed? We loved those characters that we saw in the movies for a reason and now theyβre just a bunch of faggots, which barely any resemblance to the ones in the mic.
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TheFantasyReader
I love this comedy version of the marvel with op mc and a whole lot of strange, weird, and (strangely?) bodyguards. Not to mention the mc is not a goody-two-shoes who does everything for charity. All in all, it is a nice refreshing comedy novel with a evil and cute mc. I hope the author does not drop this.
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Celestails
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Rukimedsu
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trevas
Amei faz um que ele troca de gΓͺnero mas continua a histΓ³ria tΓ‘ super mega legal faz ele poder abuso ver emergia residual dos celestiais e faz o protagonista ster mas espertos que os personagens de outras histΓ³rias que leio sΓ³ pensando em ganhar poder mas Γ© mas burro que uma galinha
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Chidian
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Celestails
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Hentai_Senchou
This story has the big gay. Which part is the big gay?
Is it the part where the mc looks and sounds like a girl? No. I think it's because I was dumb enough to read this until a few arcs after butch was introduced.
If none of you know butch, he is crystalized gay. He's ALWAYS reading gay gangbang p0rn. He tricked thor into a makeout session. He tricked Captain America into agreeing to a gay threesome. He rubbed his erect d!ck all over Captain Americas butt. The mc gave him the winter soldiers sleeper cell code words and if I read any further and butch gets what he wants, I will see bucky turn into his s3x slave.
I would be ok if the gay only happened every now and then, but it's literally been a heavily worded part of EVERY major event that has happened. It is to the point that I say that this story has the big gay.
I don't hate gay people, but the only gay p0rn I like to watch involves two women. I might think differently if butch being gay somehow added to the story, but the author added it for comedic purposes. It only feels like watching someone beat a gay dead horse though
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