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Katherinekee
nice story the ml very patience .....love it hope the fl fall for him too and we dont have to wait for too long ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“
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Katherinekee
๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“
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Sulizamy
love it.......thank you lovely author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Katana_Sky
๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Amazing novel with cute couples who try very hard to understand each other. โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ
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โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โคโค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜โค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜โคโคโคโคโคโค
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Lovely_Ombao
I love this novelโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ fun,heart warming,love,and overall amazingly beautiful novel that i look up to i will wait for the new updates thank you so much that you write this novel i truly love this keep writing โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜˜
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Donpolly19
It keeps getting more Interesting.... Amazing story, plots and twist all in place Suspense filled... Wonderful Character Presentation and intriguing... Thumbs up for nice work....
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Donpolly19
Waohhhhhh..... What can I say? U have pushed it to the summit... Amazing work of literature... Twist and plots all intact, intriguing and Suspense filled... Action packed and the right words in place.... More updates please.... Thumbs up
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Agustusceacer
I am in love with the story line so much so that I am waiting for new chapters every time I look at this app. The Male Lead so sweet. I mean so cute like the ideal caring type of guys that girls want. Caring and Gentle not like the ones with harsh or mean attitude or being cold or ruthless to the female lead. He understands her so much. I am personally is not into men who pushes the female lead against the wall and confessing or just hurting them in any way. I love that he is slow and patient with her. And I do believe in love at first sight author so please continue your beautiful story and don't give up. Fighting!
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lazylyn
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racketyrecounter
The storyline is really great, The story development and character design is also fabulous. We can see the way in which the female lead grows as a person and the complex emotions she faces while she tries to come out of her nightmares and move on in her life. The family bond which the female lead shares with her foster family is also very sweet. The male lead too is awesome, the way he helps and tries to understand the problems faced by the female lead is heartwarming. Definitely a book worth reading โคโคโค
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Luna10
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Luna10

Very interesting and fun but be a drama or something else I would have been so long hook. The story is very sad, give you grief, greedy many aspects of life. ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’™๐ŸŒŸ ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒŸ ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒŸ ๐Ÿท๐Ÿ’จ๐Ÿ’จ๐Ÿ’จ๐Ÿ™Š Shut up
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randomcat
Well, I started reading this story because I thought the plot seemed kinda interesting. The first 2/3 chapters were good. But then the plot started developing weirdly. And there were a lot of small spelling mistakes. The characters are interesting. But the speed in which the ML fell for the FL is a bit too fast although it was love at first sight. And his thoughts were absurd. I don't think someone who fell in love just now would be so rational. Where were the heart beats and muddle headedness?? I feel it's a nice opportunity being wasted. The author should write a few more details. In the end, the plot is nice but the way it's written is not.
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